What is your opinion?
I really like it so far
"I picked this book on a whim and have loved it. I hope there are more updates coming soon! I can't wait to see how these characters grow and develop from here! "
Good plot
"The storyline is intriguing and keeps the reader engaged. There are multiple grammatical errors throughout the story but it is still readable."
Love this book ❣️
"Please update soon I love this book ❣️ "
Her beast
"I really like your writing style, it's also a page turner! Keep up the good work👍"
Her beast
"It's a good story so far. Keep updating!!!!"
Her beast
"Like the story concept"
The beast
"It's a good story start reading and can't wait to see what happens next "
He beast
"Good story, loved it, but it made me mad that there was no ending, couldn’t you have put an ending?. I hate to read stories that aren’t finished"
Her beast
"I love this story! It has me on my toes the whole time. I’m dying to know what the beast is. Definitely would recommend reading it!"
Shadows Hidden in the Dark
"Interesting and intriguing story so far. Who is the beast really? Why is she not safe? Why are her parents so rude and sharp with her? What happened to her friends, though I use that term loosely?"
Unfinished, unrefined, but getting somewhere
"Flawed in many ways, has some generic tropes and story beats, but it does get more interesting along the way. General worldbuilding lacks depth and intrigue in general, but there are some later developments expanded upon that would be interesting to dive more into. Needs grammatical editing for lack of clear pov. Dialogue can be frustrating at times especially earlier on with the main male protagonist repeating the “I can’t tell you yet” excuse keeping the female lead in the dark without building off of it with more weight and nuance. Characters are a bit one dimensional, but has potential to improve and elaborate on personalities and characterization. Overall, has some big flaws but still a fun read for the genre. I’m interested in the next chapters to be released to see where the author takes the story."
