What is your opinion?
Amazing
"This story is amazing, the plot is just wow.This story is different from others, and I enjoyed it. Looking for more update, wish you all the best for your work. ❤️"
Great!!
"My favourite thing about this writing was the descriptions. They were beautifully written, poetic, and lyrical. Almost otherworldly. They really gave a mystical feel to your writing, which I really enjoyed. As beautiful as they were, I would consider splitting them up throughout multiple paragraphs so that it is not a huge block of text, but the content was lovely. The other thing I loved was the inclusion of Japanese. I thought that was really cool and this is my first time seeing a story with Japanese in it, though I would put the translations a bit more frequently, just so the reader knows what is happening and doesn’t miss anything important. But overall, I think you have something really great going here! A little more editing and tweaking and I think you’ll have a powerful story here. Great job so far! :) "
Wonderful
"The author's writing style is poetic and detailed. The characters feel like they're all their own people, which is something I search for in every story I read. That being said, it's too descriptive in some places and a lot of those descriptions are repetitive. One example is when Amber is being described and there's two or three sentences about her skin when only one would be enough. While the story does flow, it would flow a lot smoother if some of the details were cut down. "
