What is your opinion?
The hidden fragrance
"So far book is interesting keep up the good writing 😃😃"
The hidden fragrance
"To be honest, this book has lot of emotions. I loved it. It feels like reality as we read on. The story is perfect that it attaches the reader to the story and it feels real. This book is also one of the real issue that many people have. Simply, I love the book. Waiting for chapters to come ; ] -Sanu-"
OMG ! amazing!
"i honestly usually love fantasy books, but you got me addicted to this story! i love the plots so much and the style! wow! i am speechless ! especially the comedy !"
Fans of Romance would love this
"If you're a fan of teenage romance novels like Kissing Booth & To All Girls I Loved Before, you will love this story. There are some excellent characters such as normal-girl and ass-hole boy. The world-building is excellent and well researched. I loved the family-like values. I cannot wait to read more about these characters and this world. Now, yes, there are a few grammar errors but if you can look beyond, you're going to have a good time."
Potential
"Ok, I had fun reading the story, but it need a lot of editing. At times it was hard to follow, in later chapters it got better. The characters are fun but need a bit more developing, backstory vise. The plot is fun enough and makes you want to know more of what is to come. Keep up the good work :)❤😁"
The Hidden Fragrance
"The grammar needs some help and buffing out. There is no need to have a lot of cussing within descriptions and “ass” could be paralleled with something else. Otherwise, the plot is really good and has been keeping an even fast burn pace which hooks the reader in and keeps them guessing what will happen next. Can’t wait for the next chapters, good luck "
The rant of a semi confused optimist
"As an editor, I have seen a lot of authors bring all kinds of work in all kinds of forms to me. When I first got on Inkitt, I was excited because I had never been on any one of this platforms. I expected unique works and fresh ideas and to be honest, that's exactly what I've got. I'll admit it, I didn't expect J.K Rowling or Sanderson to have written this but this book has a long way to go before it can be something many will tear each other down in libraries to read but with what I've seen, it's not too bad to be changed. The spelling errors are abysmal(sorry in case this sounds offensive) in the first chapter but as the book proceeds they get less and less. They are still visible by the end of the book, however, but this just shows that with more practice, they can be completely eradicated from it. I will check out the author's new book as I hope to see a further improvement in the overall writing quality. Then, we have the whole generic start to the teen drama book, waking up for school which in this case serves no point entirely as it could be replaced by a back story or a monologue by one of the characters. Instead, all we see is a new character being introduced before we've even had a chance to bond with Kylie. The emotions, though justified, could have been portrayed more vividly i.e. (and forgive me for the cliché) we could show and not tell. It was done well in some parts and terribly in others where it wasn't necessary. Handling that inconsistency and being able to discern where to show and tell could take your writing miles higher than most. Side bar; when trying to show, not tell, you may want to cut back on the verbs as it becomes repetitive. Try going for dialogue at times, or just thoughts. Instead of gasping or shocking all the time, a person can just think "Why was he leaving me behind?" Speaking of thoughts, I am however impressed by your ability to incorporate them in first person writing, a majority of writers fail to handle it well and only settle for it when using third person writing, so kudos to you for doing that. Now that we're on the good stuff, I think I should commend the author on the plot. It was quite solid with very few plot holes though you could delve deeper into each of the aspects of Kylie and Dominic's backstories. That would make them seem more human and readers would probably connect more than just telling us about the story blandly, and it would make the story more memorable in the end. Thanks for reaching out to me Arpita and hope that your passion for entertaining people through writing takes you farther than you can possibly fathom. I will be looking forward to the completion of a new book where you have considered and worked upon these changes. Godspeed."
Plugged.
"Well, I noticed that most of your books were plugged from Tiffanyluvss’ works. I hope you make note of that. Give credit where it’s due. I notice you follow her as well. Always remember to follow your own inspiration. Authors work hard to come up with their ideas."
