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Galaxy War

"Quite the story. Very interesting twist on space themed stories"

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Galactic War

"Good story line, very interesting, I'm not a big reader, but this is interesting and has my attention "

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Galaxy at war

"Lo ve the story"

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"This has an actually super good story. You can broaden your audience by publishing your story on NovelStar Mobile App."

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Great

"This really helped me to lessen my stress! what a great story. thank you for writing this. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"

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Freddie

"What an excellent read! Second time actually. I really hope you will finish it. Realy enjoy the humor, suspense and thrill. The first book is also a good way to get lost and cut off from reality, albeit only for a while. Keep on writing...... Please "

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Mr lawrence dickson

"It's different from the normal sfic and it's clear that a lot of thought and time has been spent on the book. Enjoying it "

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Great story.!

"I really don't like forcing an evaluation right in the middle of a book. I hope this libray app doesn't do this often. I'm curious why this 2nd book in the series wasn't on SOL?"

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Galaxy at war

"Awesome story. I have read all of Vanessa,s books on SOL and will continue to read any she brings out here as well. Well written and enjoyable Vanessa"

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Galaxy at war

"Good story and i likeit"

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Very attention getting

"I'm 78 years old and have been reading SciFi for at least 70 of those years. Chapter 1 grabbed me from the get-go and when I got to the end, I was Gobsmacked. The plot is fantastic, the writing just draws you iin and I am looking forward to the continuing story line. I reside in a nursing home with a very limited monthly allowance, but I would be willing to try to buy this story when it's released. The author writes in way that pulls you in to the story. The character development kinda makes me want to be part of the group of young people."

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Mr. Nobody

"Great story!!!"

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It's good

"Sometimes there's too much explanation of details other than that everything is fine with the story"

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Galaxis at war

"Sehr schön und interressant geschrieben hoffe es geht weiter so "

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lurker longest (i think)

"been following your work a long time, shortly after your second story went up on fiction press. i dont normally do re-reads of stuff. yours is a rare exception, more so as i like the hole world set."

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Galaxy at War

"I have not enjoyed a story as much as this one in awhile. Very Pleased! I like the way the characteristics of the aliens. I like the backstory as it is being presented. I like he immortal Warrior I like Roy and I really like the big furry Fury. I have a great oversized cat that looks like fat panther so I an relate. No sure I like the men that look like hot women!!!!"

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Very interesting. The plot is good, also the writing and the journey of roy is quite fascinating. Enjoy a lot. Go for the next part

"Very interesting story. The journey of Roy is very well written by the writer. Enjoy a lot. "

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trman

"Thank you for taking the time to wtite this very engossing story. I hope to read the rest soon."

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Galaxy at war

"Great story have enjoyed all your stories so far keep up the good work. "

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Galaxy at War

"Great story. Cannot wait for the next part."

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