It could be much better

"I came to this story, because it sounded really interessting. Sadly, there seems to be a mistake. Chapter One contains "Chapter 1&2" and Chapter 2 contains "Chapter 1", the story is left unfished, although it is marked as complete. Further, there is way too much dialogue without clarification who is speaking and after a view lines it then gets confusing. It could be a great story, the plot caught me, but it sadly ready mostly like a screenplay. "