What is your opinion?
Enjoyable 😎
"I am going to assume that English is not the author's first language. The language barrier makes understanding the story a bit difficult, although I think the plot is quite intriguing. Keep on writing, the more you do it, the easier it gets. 👍 (I am also English second language) We can do this 💪 Keep up the good work. "
Love it
"I did like the novel but I would love for it to be a bit more concise..Overall the story was good and I loved it. The author has a good writing style."
Very interesting
"The start of the book had caught my attention from the very beginning to end making me feel very intrigued by it and fast paced too. I couldn’t even seem to be able to stop reading this book myself because I want to find out what will happen next and the characters solving this mystery. Furthermore, this author has very good writing skills, great range of punctuation skills, good grammar as well as amazing use of writing techniques to make you feel like you are a part of the character life or in the book with them. Overall, I would recommended this book to people who love reading mystery book and you will never regret choosing to read this book!"
Intriguing
"A fast-paced tale brimming with intrigue and thrill"
Hmmmm
"Interesting story ... The author is a crafty one"
Great start
"The story holds a lot of promise. It is interesting and doesn't give too much away too soon. There are a few blunders here and there (but that's normal, all us writers make these mistakes, I know I do) but once those are buffed out, you will have a really great story. Keep working at it✌️"
Mystery of murder city
"I like the idea of the book, plot is interesting but because of errors both in punctuation and grammar, it is hard to read. Also, you use very long sentences. It is confusing. Maybe little work and editing could help :) I understand that you are not native English and I admire your effort. Keep it up, work on yourself and it’ll pay off :) good luck. "
Grammar is just as important as the story
"The plot of the story of where it's going is interesting, unfortunately, it was difficult to understand a few sentences due to the fact that there are multiple punctuation, period, comma and grammatical errors. So it made it challenging to keep up with what was going on, some of the sentence were longer then they needed to be. And some phrase didn't make sense. I personally never read this type of genre of murder/mystery. But you asked me to review your story, and I wanted to keep it fair by reading at least 10 chapters. And although I do find the plot very intriguing and eye catching, there are some mistakes that should be addressed. Overall, I am happy with how long and how much time and effort you put into creating this story, keep it up and don't give up on your writing :)"
Good effort
"I think that for your first story this is pretty good, you have a lot to work on but that is okay :) Try to add more commas to your story, and maybe work on making your sentences a little shorter. Trust me compared to my first writing this is absolutely great. Try to make some edits every now and then and in no time your story will be a lot better!"
