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HIDDEN PATH : The Mysterious case of Mansion…

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Summary

The story about the two teenage girls who solve crimes around them….this story will be filled with be many mystery, thriller and horror events ….the two girls will be team up with retired police officer and solve crimes together…..during their journey they will come across many unusual cases….it will be fun to see how these three meet up as well as solve the each cases…. This time they are here to solve the Mysterious case of Mansion where man took his own life...but someone in the family thinks its murder not suicide…while investigating the case the girls comes to know about many secrets which led them to think mystery about man death… will the girls able to solve this case or they will witness something else…

Status
Complete
Chapters
20
Rating
2.0 1 review
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

Far away from the city….there is Mansion…it’s the night time and everyone in the Mansion goes to sleep after wonderful fest they had with the family….the family is happy as they had never spend the time together and today they gathered and also to cherish memories which they had been missing….

Around mid night the person enters the bathroom with man and places him on the tub slowly….its rainy season so no one knows what is happening in the house except for the two people…..the man looks terrified and sacred for his life and tries to speak but couldn’t...…the person opens the pipes was well as the shower to fill the tub with water….the man tries to move but his whole body has been paralysed….the person has given something to this man that he can’t speck nor he can move….the man had tears in his eyes seeing the person….the person knees beside him and looks at the man with red eyes and so much anger…..the tub starts to fill and slowly the water falls outside and flows….the person keeps the hand on the man head and pushes him slowly into the water….the man drowns in it and starts to choke…his eyes only fixed on the person who is pressing him slowly in the water…

After sometime the breaths becomes slow and the man loses his conscious and the grip on the tub slowly starts to lose….the person again presses the man fully inside and leaves there as the man slowly goes out of the breath and hand finally falls in the water….he takes his diary and tears the paper and the person folds the paper and keeps in the water proof cover…and then keeps it inside his pocket and goes from there leaving the man in the bathroom….the water slowly comes out of it and starts to flow in the entire room….the person gives one last look to the man and goes from there closing the door behind….the man eyes only fixed on the door as he praying to god to save him from this drowning but no one is coming any further in the bathroom….the lights go off and the whole place is in complete dark….slowly the man loses his conscious and closes his eyes to say the goodbye to world….

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hi, no offence but the grammar is atrocious. I cannot bring myself to read the chapter finish. I'm sorry

4 years
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multiple grammar errors, using elipses instead of periods, the list goes on

4 years

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