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ADNIA: ORIGINS

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Chosen as the leaders of the generation for the Kepler's New World, the brothers Arac and Amsiret will be delivered to a strange island, where the demigod Elgoneth has isolated his sister Marlina for a hundred years; since she is destined to become the new queen for the promised new nation of gods and humans. She must choose one of the two as her eternal king, and thus, raise the new empire. But the ambitions of the three will be tested by an unexpected mortal, whom in her actions, rests the imperfect fate of the new earthling race.

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Complete
Chapters
30
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n/a
Age Rating
13+

PROLOGUE: ITHILIĖM ELGONETH

ITHILIĖM ELGONETH

(Come to us, Elgoneth)

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“Elgoneth, spirit of light, spirit of air, spirit of life. Come to us! Show us your golden garments! Stroll your floating vestments through the underlying trails of your deepest forests! Feed our dreams! Nourish our souls! Fulfill our devotion! Give us your light! Break our fears! Disrupt our sorrows! Infringe on each of our ways! Let us float among the magical currents of your divine intentions, for I have seen you father! I´ve seen you in the morning! I´ve seen you gleaming at dawn! I´ve seen you awake, in the miraculous twinkling of the perfect springs! Those designed by your own beatific hands. Delivered to this world as promises of victory, promises of glory, promises of faith. Let us believe in your will. Let us believe in our destiny. Let us believe, in you.”

–Leyra Aramordt

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