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Captivating Story

"I love the story line. To the supernatural world, Layla is considered fragile and weak, but deep down she’s just as strong as they are maybe more, as mental strength strength can succeed far more than the physical. I can’t wait to see how the story unfolds. "

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Great!

"This has been such a good read! Only wish I had paced myself, and not finished it so quickly! Can’t wait for a new chapter 🖤"

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His death

"I like food"

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Little Death

"Great book"

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Awesome!

"Best story I've read in a good long while, of it's genre. I'm trying not to give away too much of the story and hopefully to not spoil it before others get to enjoy it as I have, but it is a truly amazing, very well written and extremely enjoyable read. I highly recommend it!!!"

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Love

"I have absolutely been loving this story line. I have specific things I look for on this app, and this covers all of them. I’m on edge with every chapter, and find myself chuckling or even crying at certain points."

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Great book

"The novel is great ❤️it's the waiting for the updates that's killing me "

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Love it!

"I love the story line, and style of writing. There is nothing I dislike. Can’t wait to read more!"

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Little Death

"I like the quick pace without losing the detail. It feels like I'm being just as swept up as the characters around me!"

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Wow. Just wow.

"I have never been much for supernatural/fantasy fiction, so I initially started to skip over this book. But boy am I glad I opened it on a whim. The plot had me hooked immediately and I was waiting for something to happen almost from the very beginning. Once they met, the writer did an amazing job of building tension between Elias and Layla. In addition to the main characters, I also thoroughly enjoyed the development of characters such as Stella and her parents. Their friendship is beautiful. The use of language is superb, and I found myself re-reading certain paragraphs because I did not want the chapter to end. My only wish is that I had discovered this story a bit later in its development because I could easily have enjoyed reading the entire thing in one sitting. In the meantime, I cannot wait for the next updates."

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It's cute and funny

"It seems the run of the mill supernatural romance, but I enjoy the quirky, romance and the well placed suspense. Keep working on grammar and look to extend your vocabulary. I personally get a little bored with the overuse of the word "said"; but other than that you're getting there!👍"

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