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Make Me Break - Rewrite

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Summary

"You know, you don't have to act like an asshole just because you're feeling like one" I was getting irritated. Yes, I will admit, he is a greek god carved by Zeus himself but you know what they say: Like father like son. Or in this case, Like creator, like invention. "Why do you care? you are the preppy little new girl who is just soaking up as much attention as you can until people find out you are really are, a homewrecker thinking you could even touch someone like me. Well let me give a little news flash, stop acting like the bitch who cares and just show your true whore self" He breathed in my face,he was shaking from anger...but the anger wasn't directed towards me, you could see in his eyes he was mad at himself more. But why? And also, damn that hurt.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Intro

Welcome! This is a rewrite of my original version which you can find on Wattpad! There will be a whole series and this is the first book in the series.

My Wattpad account is Mk122708 and I hope you enjoy my original story, this book will be updated once a week! Enjoy

Makayla

“You know, you don’t have to act like an asshole just because you’re feeling like one” I was getting irritated. Yes, I will admit, he is a greek god carved by Zeus himself but you know what they say: Like father like son. Or in this case, Like creator, like invention. “Why do you care? you are the preppy little new girl who is just soaking up as much attention as you can until people find out you are really are, a homewrecker thinking you could even touch someone like me. Well let me give a little news flash, stop acting like the bitch who cares and just show your true whore self” He breathed in my face,he was shaking from anger...but the anger wasn’t directed towards me, you could see in his eyes he was mad at himself more. But why? And also, damn that hurt.

Hi, my name is Anastasia! I'm 16 and a junior in high school. I just moved to Cali with my mom since my dad abandoned us for his porn star girlfriend... shocker. My goal for this new chapter in my life is to happily move on and leave my old life, fake friends, and ex boyfriends behind. I just can't wait to find out what this new opportunity will bring!

...Or so I thought I did-

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