The Crowned She by Krustycaramel at Inkitt
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THE CROWNED SHE

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Summary

"ONCE UPON A TIME!" Every princess story starts with a lie but mine starts with RULES! I break the rules and I try not to be caught breaking them... DEAR DIARY! Princess Sultan writes... In the kingdom of Egypt, Kleopatra Sultan was the princess of King Horus Sultan and Queen Hatsheput Sultan. The Princess is given two choices, marry the lieutenant commander or remain in the palace for the rest of her life. Kleopatra is an ambitious girl, she dreams of becoming the queen and ruler of Egypt, but her fate puts her on the path of a Prince.

Status
Complete
Chapters
37
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

PERSONS

KING HORUS SULTAN

QUEEN HATSHEPUT SULTAN

PRINCESS KLEOPATRA SULTAN

AGE: 18

PRINCE RAMSES SULTAN

AGE:32

PRINCE CHARLES HUGHES

AGE:26

SEBASTIAN BALTIMORE

AGE:30

ZOSAR YOUSSEF

AGE: 36

HALEY ACRE

AGE:25

MARIAM

AGE:20

RASHIDA SULTAN

AGE:28

AUTHORS NOTE:

Words written in bold and italics are the words of LADY SULTAN and the words written in bold are the things or sounds of everything happening...

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Hi Krustycaramel,

I just finished reading your story “The Crowned She” and I loved it so much. Your writing is amazing, and I kept thinking how cool it would look as a comic based on the rich historical fantasy setting.

I really loved Chapter 1 (Persons) when Princess Kleopatra Sultan introduces us to palace life under King Horus and Queen Hatsheput her internal diary voice is so vivid and expressive, it sets the tone perfectly for visual storytelling, with ornate costumes and political tension simmering beneath the surface. And the moment when she’s presented with the choice marry the lieutenant commander or remain confined to the palace forever feels full of dramatic potential. Imagine a two‑page spread contrasting Kleopatra’s regal posture with the weight of that ultimatum, the room bathed in royal golds and shadows.

I’m a commissioned artist, and I’d love to draw your story into a comic/manga. No pressure though, I just think your work would look awesome in comic form.

You can check out some of my recent work on my DeviantArt (Username – Ev3Verse). If you’re interested, please message me on Discord (Username – Eve_Verse) so we can bring the story to life visually. I’ll be waiting to hear from you!

Regards,
Evee

a year

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