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Broken mate

"This was a good read. Enough plot twist so it didn’t follow down the same path as most books of this sort. I really hope that you do add some chapters! "

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The Lucan’s kings broken Luna

"Love it great story couldn’t stop reading it "

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The lycan kings broken Luna

"Love the story and found it thrilling to read and could not put the book down, I would of loved to read the whole thing and to see the Luna and lycan king come out from beneath all the dangers to find their happy ending but overall loved it "

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Lycan King

"Love the story!!"

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Ms Puvii

"Beautiful written. I love it and can't stop reading it. Please share more chapters"

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The lycan king's broken luna

"Really enjoying this book! I really hope there is more chapters to read 😍 can't wait to see what is going to happen next 😀"

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Excellent plot

"The characters are great and this is such a great story of hardship that she goes through. I hope she ends up happy!"

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Please

"I get that life is full of the unexpected and the expected. Please just write when u can but please continue to write. So many authors on these apps start a book and never finish it. Please Please don't do that. This story is amazing and I want to see how it all shakes out. Thank you "

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Great read

"Exciting, lots of drama, not too descriptive. A few spelling errors but nothing major. Enjoying the story line. Curious to learn how long it will take ‘Em to adjust."

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The Lycan King's Broken Luna

"The storyline is brilliant. Kept me intrigued. I just wish it was completed. Fingers crossed đŸ€ž The odd spelling mistake but not so bad you can't figure it out. All in all great storyline one were you hope the villain will be dealt with slowly and painfully ."

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Avid reader

"Wild imagination. No errors that I noticed. "

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The Lycan kings broken Luna

"I enjoy the suspense of what is happening and get satisfaction when the ‘good guys’ overpower their enemies but without it dragging on for many chapters. It feels like the story is constantly moving which keeps me interested and wanting to keep reading to find out what will happen next. "

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Iri

"It is a good story but if that is the end I think it is incomplete."

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The King's lost luna

"I really liked the plot even if we can say it's a little clichéic in the Werewolf fantasy world. "

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Great

"It’s so far very intriguing story. Only downside is some grammar and spelling mistakes "

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Lycan Kings Broken Luna

"Thus far,, it's a good read.....um, can I continue?"

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