If you have ever stayed up way too late reading just one more chapter because you wanted to see two enemies finally admit their feelings, you know how addictive the enemies to lovers trope can be. At Inkitt, we see a lot of these stories come through, and we love them when they are done right. But we have also noticed a few common mistakes that can ruin the magic.
Here is our guide on how to build an enemies to lovers plot that keeps readers hooked from start to finish.
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1. Start with Real Conflict
Readers want to believe the “enemies” part of the trope. The characters should have a genuine reason to dislike or even distrust each other at the start. It could be a clash of values, a rivalry, or being on opposite sides of a bigger battle.
Good Example:
Two witches from rival covens are forced to work together to stop a powerful curse. Their families have feuded for generations, and neither wants to admit the other might have a point.
Bad Example:
Two characters call each other names in the first chapter but quickly fall in love with no explanation. That is not “enemies to lovers.” That is just bickering for show.
“We always say at Inkitt: if the conflict could be solved in one polite conversation, it is not a real enemies to lovers story.” — Inkitt Editorial Team
2. Build the Tension Slowly
The magic of this trope is the slow burn. Let your characters fight, scheme, and deny their feelings for a while. The more push and pull you add, the sweeter the payoff when they finally give in.
Tip from our Inkitt Review Team:
Add small moments where the characters notice something attractive about the other, even if they refuse to admit it. A lingering glance. A reluctant laugh. A moment of unexpected trust.
3. Make the Shift Believable
Going from hate to love should feel natural. Do not flip the switch overnight. Instead, show how respect grows over time. Maybe one character sees the other’s bravery during a dangerous quest. Or maybe they realize their enemy understands them better than anyone else ever has.
Good Example:
An arrogant prince and a rebel leader are forced to travel together. He starts to admire her cleverness, while she notices he risks his life to protect others.
Bad Example:
“I hated him yesterday, but today he is the love of my life because his eyes are blue.”
4. Keep the Banter Sharp
Enemies to lovers thrives on witty dialogue and sizzling banter. Let your characters tease each other, challenge each other, and maybe even flirt without realizing it.
“Some of our favorite submissions at Inkitt had banter so good, we laughed out loud at the office. Readers remember the lines that make them grin.” — Inkitt Content Team
5. Do Not Forget the Payoff
Readers are waiting for the big moment when the walls finally come down. Make it worth the wait. Whether it is a stolen kiss, a desperate confession, or a climactic scene in the middle of danger, the payoff should feel both inevitable and earned.
Final Thoughts
Writing enemies to lovers is all about balance: real conflict, slow burn tension, believable growth, and unforgettable chemistry. When it works, it is one of the most satisfying tropes in romance. At Inkitt, we are always excited to see new authors bring their own twist to it.
So tell us in the comments: What is your favorite enemies to lovers story you have ever read or written?
