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Goldilocks

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Summary

the story of goldilocks and the three bears retelling. a classic with a twist. with not much to her name and having been kicked out of the family home what else was she meant to do then go into the a seemingly abandoned house she stumbled across in the woods. with the smell of food in the air her stomach grumbled greedily. she carefully knocked on the door but no reply only for the door to open from her knocks. the door being unlocked seemed not to pay much win her mind as she rushed in towards the food. her first mistake. the door slammed shut.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

Once upon a time, in a remote village nestled deep within an ancient forest, lived a girl named Bonnie Abbott. With golden curls that tumbled down her back and an angelic face, Bonnie was adored by her family, which included her mam, dad, auntie, uncle, two older cousins, twins, and her beloved grandma. They all shared a cosy home where laughter mingled with the scent of pine and the warmth of the hearth.

One chilly afternoon, the house was empty, and a rumbling stomach reminded Bonnie that she hadn’t eaten in some time. Feeling particularly mischievous, she tiptoed into the kitchen, her eyes gleaming with the thought of the cookie jar perched high upon the counter. With a determined heave, she climbed onto the counter and reached for the jar. To her delight, she found only one lonely cookie inside. Just as she clutched it in her hand, the door swung open, and her family burst in, their cheerful chatter filling the air.

Caught red-handed, Bonnie felt her heart race.

“Get the hell out of my house! You ungrateful little wench!” her father shouted, snatching the jar away from her, but Bonnie instinctively pulled back, causing the jar to tumble and shatter into countless pieces on the floor.

Her auntie gasped as she saw the shards of pottery scattered everywhere. “Look what you’ve done, Bonnie!” she cried, eyeing the broken remnants of what had been a cherished anniversary gift.

“Apologies,” her mother said sternly, fixing her gaze on Bonnie.

“But I didn’t do anything!” Bonnie protested, a plea in her voice.

“Just apologies!” her mother insisted, frustration evident in her tone.

“It’s fine, Daisy. An apology isn’t going to fix anything,” her auntie chimed in, trying to mediate the rising tension.

“Bonnie, as punishment, you will have to go out and collect firewood and cut some logs while the rest of us prepare dinner,” her father interjected, his face lined with displeasure as he gathered the shards and placed them into a handkerchief.

“But it’s snowing, and I am not good at cutting wood!” Bonnie pleaded, her eyes darting around for sympathy.

“Now, Bonnie!” her father shouted, grabbing her arm and dragging her out through the back door. “I’ll come get you when the time is up.” With a hard slam, the door closed behind her.

You might think such a punishment was harsh for just eating a cookie, but let me explain. This village, isolated from the world, faced long winters that became increasingly difficult. Food supplies dwindled, and money became scarce. Once, they had been snowed in for a whole month, with barely enough food to survive. Bonnie knew that the sweet treats saved for special occasions were precious, and indulging in them while ignoring her chores was irresponsible.

Out in the biting cold, Bonnie banged on the door, desperate to return. But when her attempts failed, she trudged into the snow-covered woods, seeking firewood. Distracted by her thoughts and the swirling flurries, she quickly became lost as darkness fell. As she wandered through the trees, Bonnie stumbled upon a quaint little house she had never seen before. Through the window, she glimpsed a delicious-looking cake, its tempting aroma wafting through the air and making her stomach grumble. With her heart pounding, she knocked on the door, but silence greeted her. She peeked through the windows—no one was home. To her surprise, the door was unlocked. Feeling the cold nipping at her, she stepped inside, her breath visible in the frosty air.

The interior was lavish, filled with fancy furniture and a basket of neatly stacked logs by the fireplace. “I could just take these logs,” she reasoned, “after I’ve had something to eat.” The thought was too enticing to resist.

With growing hunger, she opened the kitchen cabinets, and after locating a plate and a knife, she cut a generous slice of cake and stuffed it into her mouth. It was delightful—neither too hot nor too cold, just perfect. Soon, she had devoured another slice and was left wanting more. Thirsty now, she filled a glass from the tap and drank deeply. As she stood there, considering her next move, Bonnie hesitated. The thought of the outside world, where the trees loomed dark and the cold settled in her bones, made her shiver anew. “Lighting a fire won’t hurt,” she murmured, gathering three logs and striking a match. The flames crackled to life, casting a warm glow around the room. “Oh, this is nice and warm,” she sighed, holding her hands out to the fire. She then spotted a soft sofa and draped herself in a cosy blanket she found, letting the warmth envelop her. Before she knew it, her eyelids grew heavy and her body relaxed against the cushions. With the flickering light from the fire illuminating the room and the sweet aftertaste of cake lingering on her lips, Bonnie drifted into a deep slumber, unaware of the enchanting adventure that awaited her dreams. The forest outside whispered secrets, and the house filled with the promise of mystery, but for now, Bonnie was lost in the comfort of a newfound warmth, cradled in a world that was all her own.

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