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THE ONE WHO PASSES

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Summary

“Does fate guide the creature, or does the creature determine its own fate?” Born from a divine vision of the lion-headed goddess Tefnut, Aziza was never meant for a quiet life. While her parents raised her in safety, a dark decree was rising in the Kingdom of Sobekana. She is forced into a desperate flight toward a destiny she never asked for but as the line between savior and destroyer blurs, Aziza must decide if she will be the one to fulfill the prophecy, or the one to break it.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
6
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1


“Does fate guide the creature? Or does the creature determine its own fate?”

The air was filled with cries of both pain and joy. Karnetia, the wife of the renowned scholar Said, labored to bring forth new life. It had been five long years since their wedding, a period marked by desperate prayers for a child. Their hopes were answered nine months earlier when the Goddess of Water, Tefnut, appeared to Karnetia in a dream. Half-joyful and half-fearful, Karnetia narrated the vision to her husband:

“The head of a lioness, the body of a woman. Her voice resonated like a thousand roars, and she carried the scent of morning dew. She told me I was with child and that we were to name her Aziza. She would possess great power, we would train her and when the time came, we were to send her to the Kingdom of Sobekana to fulfill her destiny.”

Said was initially skeptical, as years of fruitless attempts had led them to fear they were barren. However, his disbelief turned to joy as Karnetia's belly began to swell.

Now, nine months later, Karnetia was in labor, surrounded by midwives. After hours of effort, a cry rang out, and a daughter was born into the house of Said. They named her Aziza. As a child, Aziza had beautiful brown skin, hair as white and soft as snow, and captivating grey eyes that resembled the full moon. Those who approached her often remarked on her fragrance, reminiscent of dawn's fresh dew.

Five years passed, and Aziza grew into a joyful child, cherished by her parents. Around this age, she began to exhibit unusual abilities, unintentionally phasing through walls and slipping from her father's grasp.

Said being the scholar that he is, dived into scrolls to try and figure out what the ability might mean. He searched every source he could but nothing was to be found about this unique ability.

Fifteen years later, Aziza had blossomed into a stunning woman, her beauty captivating all who saw her. She had mastered the sword and bow and had significant control over her innate Juju. Few could challenge her in a duel and escape unscathed.

One, starry night, with the full moon at its peak, Aziza's parents revealed the prophecy Tefnut had shared with them before her birth. Aziza was not surprised; she had always felt a calling, a sense that she would have to leave home one day. For six days and nights, she prepared herself for the journey to Sobekana, ready to embrace her destiny.

The night before Aziza's journey, her parents summoned her for a final farewell.

“Aziza, there is something we must tell you,” Karnetia began solemnly.

“What is it, Mother?” Aziza asked, sensing the gravity of the moment.

“I am not from Egypt,” Karnetia revealed, her voice steady. “I come from Sobekana, in the city of Nefertari. I fled the city to save my life. The ruler of Sobekana declared a law that considered the use of juju to be taboo. I came to Thebes, where I met your father, and the rest is history.”

“Why have you never told me this before?” Aziza inquired, her voice tinged with confusion.

“It is a painful past, one I rarely speak of,” Karnetia responded gently. A heavy silence filled the room until Said spoke, breaking the tension.

“You have mastered the sword and the bow,” He started, “But you have yet to master your innate Juju. You possess an ancient power not seen before. You have mastered only a fraction of your true potential. You must complete the rest of your training alone. But beware, the Kingdom of Sobekana has long isolated itself, no one knows what is happening there. You will be going in blind. Please, my child, be careful, and may Tefnut watch over you.”

“This is why I taught you the language of the Sobekanian people, so you would not be outcast,” Karnetia said.

Aziza stood, filled with questions. Why was she born with these powers? Why must she go to Sobekana? Yet she felt that the answers would reveal themselves in time.

“Mother, Father, I understand,” she said resolutely. “I promise to make you proud, and I will return home once my journey is complete.”

As she spoke, tears welled in Karnetia's eyes, and Aziza and Said moved to comfort her.

Morning came and Aziza climbed her camel greeting her parents goodbye and finally embarking on her journey…

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