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Olive Brown, Recently turned 19 and graduated. Just found out she has a sister all the way in NYC. Her desire for finding her sister takes over and this desire takes her to NYC. She obviously needs a place to stay, and she ended up staying in a house with 3 other people: Iris, her recent school friend, Iris's brother, Sebastian. And Sebastian's irritating golden retriever of a friend, Asher Vane. Asher Vane, Standing at a height of 6'1, with facial features you can't help but feel like they were handpicked by God himself to construct a man like him, His brown eyes and dimples are bound to ruin Olive. But Olive doesn't give up easily, She's in NYC for one thing and one thing only. Nobody can distract her, Not even a strange dimpled man that she wishes to strangle. Or so she thought.
FL
19
Olive Brown
Hate At First Sight
"And suddenly
You became the best part
Of all my days
And for the first time ever
I understood why
The poets wrote about love.”
ML
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Asher Vane
Love At First Sight
"Every rose has its thorns,
show me yours,
and I will show you hands
willing to bleed for you."
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jo987_123: This is a good story, but it needs a good editor to go through this iteration and fix the mistakes. The pov changes from 1st person to 3rd person, often, and sometimes within one sentence. It needs a liberal sprinkling of punctuation marks throughout, and a decision needs to be made about the char...
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Biva: Quite good for a novella. Impressive writing style and we'll edited. Just one thing- Karla keeps referring herself to a stray cat and while at first it makes sense the analogy gets stale after a while.
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Saraa: Hey! I really enjoyed your story. It made me wonder how you actually write. Are you someone who plans everything in advance, or do you discover the story as the chapters unfold?
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