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The Ghost of Ontario

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Summary

|SHORT STORY ORIGINAL VERSION| Lost in the depths of Lady Evelyn-Smoothwater Provincial Park, Ranger Kate meets a mysterious hermit who may be connected to the decade-old legend of the Ghost of Ontario. *** Ranger Kate wants only one thing: to see her son, whom she lost to a canoe accident ten years ago. The opportunity comes when she and her partner, Ranger Amelia, attend the 24-Hour Ghost of Ontario Challenge in the Lady Evelyn-Smoothwater Provincial Park. Legend has it that a ghost haunts it with his mysterious lullaby, "Lucilla," and the only way to connect with him is for two individuals to brave the lakes. Ihaan never expected to find Ranger Kate on Red Squirrel Lake, which is said to be the birthplace of the ghost. He and his eagle friend, Ro, band together to win her trust, which is crucial for Ihaan's Guardian Trial. It's the only way for him to learn whether he is truly dead. Fate turns to reality, and suddenly, the legend of the ghost is more real than Ihaan and Kate think. What will happen when the Spirit Animals come and try to interfere with their long-lost memories? Will Kate and Ihaan defeat them, or will they lose themselves to the hands of Ontario's Beast? *** *Ihaan is pronounced I-an."* *P.S. The chapters of this story are numbers written in Mohawk, the tribe Ihaan's from.*

Status
Complete
Chapters
11
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Prologue: Call from the Heavens

“Wake up, Ihaan.” The voice was faint, but it pulled Ihaan out of an everlasting dream.

He opened his deep, brown eyes, and the first thing he saw was the ceiling. He was in a cave of some sort.

The slick walls shimmered in a few rays of sunshine that managed to creep into Ihaan’s resting place. How did he get there? Ihaan did not know. His mind was a complete blur. He felt as though he had just risen from the dead.

Ihaan rose to his shaky legs and stumbled over to a small pond in the corner of the room. He stared at his reflection in awe. There he was—a young teenager who was a stranger to the world.

He had long, scraggly brown hair, tan skin, and a scar on his upper right arm. Red paint decorated his bare arms and torso. He wore brown gauntlets on his forearms, gray pants made from animal skin, and furry brown boots.

“Step outside, Ihaan.” The voice again. What was it? It was strange. The voice almost sounded familiar.

Ihaan listened to it. He limped toward a white light at the end of the cave. Halfway through his trek, he stopped and ran his long fingers down the length of his right leg. It pained him to walk, but why? There was so much going on, but Ihaan could not make sense of any of it.

The bright light blinded him, but when his eyes adjusted, he realized what he was looking at—the Lady Evelyn-Smoothwater Provincial Park.

Tall trees cast shadows over Ihaan’s shoulders, and he could barely make out the form of a lake in a cluster of brown trunks. He stood on a narrow path that stretched out and led to a shrine. It sat on a stone platform with hieroglyphics carved on its dome-shaped structure. White flowers surrounded it.

Ihaan carefully made his way to the shrine. The second he reached it, he heard a screech in the sky.

An eagle stooped down from the early morning atmosphere and soared around his head. Puffing out her white neck feathers, she settled on the shrine and over a small cluster of hieroglyphics.

The mysterious voice spoke again. “Sweet child, I think you are finally ready. Somewhere in the Lady Evelyn-Smoothwater Provincial Park is your past. My trial has officially begun, but whether you are successful or not is up to you. Ro will take you to Red Squirrel Lake. That is where you must start.”

The eagle opened her wings at her name and gave them a few quick flaps. She landed on Ihaan’s left gauntlet with an interested look. It was time. She had to make the Guardian of the Lady Evelyn-Smoothwater Provincial Park proud, including the Ghost of Ontario himself.

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