FoxyBooks

London

Wattpad Writer, Art Director

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The idea is interesting, but there's always room for more improvement.. The grammatical errors and writing style need some work, otherwise, you have potential. Keep it up!

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I'm impressed

I only read the first part and honestly? I'm impressed. For an eleven year old, this is some good work, aside from a few grammatical errors, it has some very good imagination. Also, give some time to your descriptions, otherwise, it's interesting. You've got potential kid, keep it up!

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Total page turner

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Grammars need some work, otherwise the idea is pretty interesting.

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An extraordinary style of writing, looking forward to read more!

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The Young Foreigner

Enthralling! Although a the writing style could be improved, intriguing nonetheless. Reading it, certainly won't be a regret. ❤

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Difficult to review

Peace, according to me isn’t real. It’s a mirage—something that you see from a distance that gives you hope for the things that are to come, but when you get there, you see that there’s no peace at all. Only darkness. Only pain. Only your fear.
And this being a guide to this said mirage, wasn't easy for me to rate, keeping in mind I oppose the concept.
But according to writing style, it clearly shows the writer has potential, if the few grammatical errors can be corrected. I've also noticed, like me, the writer struggles with 'commas'. I feel you @AbhishruT.

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Only first part

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This is great work. Has me totally hooked!

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A little grammatical errors, and the characters need a little more work, but otherwise, the story us off to a great start.

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The story has an interesting plot, really keeps the reader hooked! But I felt like, given the character of Dean, he could be a little more dark, not so friendly? Overall it's off to a great start!

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The First of Her Kind

A total page turner. Loving it! ❤

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