Afroluv

Just checking items off my bucket list and praying someone asks me to convert my work into a manga or webtoon someday.

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Warning, cavity inducing couple ahead!

This is one of the best master/servant books I have ever read-- and trust me, I've read a copious amount of books. Julian is adorable, yet he is not a pushover and I was really impressed with his character development. August is possessive, protective but not pushy and is a good balance for the main protagonist. I appreciate the care the author put into creating side characters like Rosa, Carson, Yohan, Joe, etc. As a reader and writer, I am floored by the creativity and devotion the author put into this text. Only minor grammar edits are needed here and there, nothing so distracting to remove a star. This is a gem more people need to read. Thank you author!

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No way is this your first novel, it's too good!

Immersive story with great 3D characters readers want to reach in and hug, fight for, protect, and in some cases shake into sensibility. It's refreshingly unique and fun to read. Thank you for taking me on this incredible journey, readingbay. Good luck on the contests!

(Since you are in the process of editing, I'm just going to leave the grammar at five stars for now knowing that you're going to be correcting some of the small errors and typos.)

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Adventure? Love? Or fantasy? YES

I loved this! The character development, the many plot twists, the depictions of war and battle as gritty and on point as the black company by Glen Cook. Thank you for writing this and sharing it here.

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Wholesome, cavity-inducing relationship goals

Characters a reader can't help but love are fully developed here with a not-so predictable plot. A feel-good story and romance that would make modern Disney slap Walt. I can't stop smiling. I read it twice so far today. Thank you for writing this!

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You need to read and♥️like this gem. Now!

This story is really well done so far. Great plot, great storytelling overall. I'm looking forward to the finish! Seriously, take my money!

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Sweet short stories of boys love

These were the sweetest short story compilations! As you grow more as an author, I hope you'll come back to these and build a full novel around one or more.

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Nice to see another Omegaverse BL writer

Yandere, yandere, yandere! Chinese style!
I enjoy alpha x Omega Omegaverse, don't know how you did it but you combined dark and cute effortlessly in your story. The erotic scenes were hot and steamy, the misunderstandings we're epic and trope-worthy.

(Shame on that possessive alpha though, he went too far. That poor beta nobody.)

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A fun read

well-written, engaging, great plot development and pacing...a thoroughly engrossing fantasy read.

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Excellent--captivating and we'll written

I enjoyed the plot. The characters had so much depth and the setting was so vivid I could see it in my mind's eye. The use of dialect was perfection. My only constructive feedback would be to review the ending. It seemed a bit rushed and unfinished. Either the cliffhanger should be more obvious or the fade to black' needs to be more gradual. This feels like I'm reading the work of an established, professional author. Call Amazon, stat!😁

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A must read

Well-thought out plot/ storyline, excellent character development, mechanics weren't 100% accurate but not so much to take away a single star. You definitely did the research on weapons, legal, technological, financial details, tactical fighting, and action scenes. Tbh the only constructive feedback I have is to update your 'shout outs'...the current generation won't recognize the Leave it to Beaver jokes, nor I Love Lucy and probably not Rico suave references, one good edit will take care of any credits in mechanics. Can't wait to see this for sale on Amazon.

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