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Superb!

A well plotted, and written, story. The characters are well developed, with depth.
The scene is well described to the point that a reader could easily feel themselves part of the details.
The actions and nuances are likewise deep and well done.
I was enthralled, and await the next part of this story!

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Perfect!

I love it. It's a great story that sums up the writers world so very well. The main character is portrayed clearly, as well as all of the protagonists, antagonists. A very firm grasp was kept on the plot from start to finish, keeping it working along a clear line, and not running away out of control.
With just a few words, and keystrokes, the author was able to convey a story of a world run by bureaucrats without heart or imagination, quashing the hopes of creative minds.
Brilliant!

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