BethRose

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Fantastic- I'm hooked

Story is really well told.
Characters are believable.
No obvious spelling or grammar mistakes

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Fantastic story. Really well told

Very well crafted story
Love the author notes at the end of the chapter

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Great story

Consistently misused words throughout the whole book eg. Latter for later, your for you're, defiantly for definitely.
Great book, but poor editing made it a frustrating read

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Freaking Fantastic

Great story. So well told.
Such relatable characters

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Fantastic lead character

Great story.
Excellent characters
Could use a bit more editing, but mostly pretty good

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Great story line

Great story. Well told.
Good characters development
No obvious spelling or grammar mistakes

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Interesting story

Good characters
Interesting story line
There are a few spelling mistakes, but nothing too major

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Great story

Just as good as your others

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Fantastic

Love the quirky characters
Good character development
Well written

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Great story. Well written

Great story. Very well told.
Character development is good.
Spelling and punctuation is good.

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Fantastic story

There are a few mistakes eg using the word coarse instead of course.
Otherwise a great story that has been well written

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Great story but needs some serious editing

Great story. Very well told, but the poor spelling and punctuation really let it down

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Great story

Great story - I'm loving it.

Spelling and punctuation started off well, but seemed to deteriorate as the book went on. Later part of the book seems a bit rushed

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Fantastic. Gripping story

Style of writing improved as the book went on.

Really well written to build suspence

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Good story, annoying characters

Lots of spelling mistakes and grammatical errors.
Characters could be developed more

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Great story

Great story

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Great story

A few spelling errors.
Good story line

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Great story, but leaves a lot of questions

Some spelling mistakes.
Story feels rushed. There is potential for the story to be given a lot more depth.
A lot of detail is missing eg Anna can't get into the bathroom.....so what is she doing about it?
How come she is out of hospital so quickly with no additional assistance such as physical therapy,?
Why is she not being questioned by the police about what she saw in the shooting?

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Great story line

No obvious spelling or grammar mistakes
Characters could be developed more

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Great story

Great story Well written. No obvious spelling or grammar mistakes

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Good story

Needs editing. There are quite a few spelling mistakes.

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Fantastic

Some spelling mistakes, but in general really well written

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Great story

A few spelling mistakes.
Story is a little confused at points

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Fabulous

Only good things to say. Very well written.

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Good storyline, but could flow better

Lots of mistakes - your/you're; there/their

Too wordy and overly dramatic. The characters end up being annoying because every feeling and action is described in such excruciating detail.

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Great story

Really well written.

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Good story

Needs editing- lots of typing errors and spelling mistakes
Good story line, but could have been developed with more depth

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Great story

Your/you're
There/their
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Otherwise a great story. Very enjoyable

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Fabulous

Great character development
Story has good continuity
Some spelling mistakes

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Fantastic

Great story
Well developed characters

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Good story line

Plot could be developed more.
Some continuity issues

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Fantastic

Punctuation could use a little work - lots of missing apostrophes, otherwise great work

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Great story

Quite a few spelling mistakes

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Great story

Some issues with the stories timelines and inconsistencies in the story

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Fantastic

Great book. Well written with a compelling story line.

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Good story line

Quite a few mistakes with spelling, grammar and use of incorrect words, but still a good story

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Compelling story line

Great use of style - the switching between characters point of view helps the reader to see story from all sides

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Great storu

Fantastic story line. Well written

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Excellent

Some spelling mistakes, but overall very well written

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Fantastic!!!

This is fantastically written. I'm hooked and can't stop reading

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Great story

Quite a few spelling mistakes and grammatical errors

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