Firefly Fanfiction

“River of guilt”

Reviewed by

Matthew Frey

Good story overall. Excellent story telling style, with a well thought out plot and excellent twists and turns. Imagery was spot on for most of the story, though I would have like to to see what the Star Lincoln looked like inside and out rather than the vague allusions that we got. One image… Read More

“This is exceptional.”

Reviewed by

kuraireikan

I noticed only 3 typos throughout; two places where a word is missing and one missing comma (I shall leave you the joy of finding them, muwahahaha.) Not only is this story well written but the idea is original and intriguing, making use of both Mr. Tudyk's work and life as an actor. But I think… Read More

“Why no more?”

Reviewed by

mawthrawn

I know this is written for the Con Man contest, but your story could go much further given how it is abruptly ended as a teaser. Your skill definitely shows in your descriptions of the atmosphere and mood of the story and the emotions of the characters. Well done, indeed.

“Free association”

Reviewed by

Alana Dill

River is a joy to write, and you write her mental perambulations so very well. This story should have more votes! I am curious about the woman in the cage, screaming, and I'm guessing this is only a glimpse at a much longer tale which, judging by your style, I would love to read. In spite of my… Read More

“Need a tissue”

Reviewed by

carleen

I love drabbles like these. In fact, it's my favorite way to write. It's possible to say so much in just a few short lines. Very sweet little story and I think you got the character's voices just right. Thankyou for sharing. Carleen

“Liked it a lot!”

Reviewed by

Paul Christianson

Had read it before but I reread it. Good storyline, good balance with story line and action. Good character dialog. Always keep moving, no stale parts. Had read it before but I reread it. Good storyline, good balance with story line and action. Good character dialog. Always keep moving, no stale… Read More