Firefly Fanfiction

“Very good episode”

Reviewed by

Alana Dill

This could have been a real episode. It was well written and you have a great understanding of the characters, their voices and motivations. I also liked your use of technical jargon, which helped ground the story. I got really confused about the egg crate, though. What's an egg crate exactly? I… Read More

“This is exceptional.”

Reviewed by

kuraireikan

I noticed only 3 typos throughout; two places where a word is missing and one missing comma (I shall leave you the joy of finding them, muwahahaha.) Not only is this story well written but the idea is original and intriguing, making use of both Mr. Tudyk's work and life as an actor. But I think… Read More

“Why no more?”

Reviewed by

mawthrawn

I know this is written for the Con Man contest, but your story could go much further given how it is abruptly ended as a teaser. Your skill definitely shows in your descriptions of the atmosphere and mood of the story and the emotions of the characters. Well done, indeed.

“Free association”

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Alana Dill

River is a joy to write, and you write her mental perambulations so very well. This story should have more votes! I am curious about the woman in the cage, screaming, and I'm guessing this is only a glimpse at a much longer tale which, judging by your style, I would love to read. In spite of my… Read More

“Need a tissue”

Reviewed by

carleen

I love drabbles like these. In fact, it's my favorite way to write. It's possible to say so much in just a few short lines. Very sweet little story and I think you got the character's voices just right. Thankyou for sharing. Carleen

“The wife's opinion”

Reviewed by

Eric Christianson

Very entertaining. Kept me engaged throughout. Nice touch, telling the story from Zoe's perspective. The plot to reunite the crew and resurrect Wash was plausible. Book's history was interesting and adhered nicely to the comic book, as did the addition of Emma.. Hope you plan to finish it - very… Read More