Star Wars Fanfiction

“A beautiful find”

Reviewed by

Retired Account

As I read this, I could actually see it all. While I loved the story-line and how you executed it, it could use some polishing up. I found typos and shifts in the writing tense, but those can be corrected or skipped over. I loved this story and its pace, as Ben is slowly introduced to the Dark… Read More

“Needs a follow up”

Reviewed by

AnakinSkyguy

Great story but where is part 2?

“The 'f" word praise”

Reviewed by

KarlaColt

I love this story. It was very well written and kept you on your feet on what happens. I recommend it to anyone in the Star Wars fandom who wishes for an alternate ending. I don't want to spoil any bit of it so I'll say it was suspenseful, heartwarming and delightful to read. Absolutely wonderful.