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"loved it excellent story "
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"loved it excellent story "
"Short and sweet! The right amount of spice. Read it all in one sitting! There were a few punctuation/grammar errors but did not affect the story. Overall a nice story with relatable characters.🥰"
"I'm a sucker for the bad guy falling for the good girl. "
"I liked it! "
"I only spotted a few minor spelling/grammatical errors. The plot and flow was enjoyable. I thin with a little work fleshing out the story some, this could easily be published!"
"Thank you for the story . Good read 👏👏👏"
"A short but enjoyable, well written story "
"Loved the story"
"I was kind of skeptical of the book at first, but I fell in love with it and it was good. I am glad it had a happy ending not a lot of them do but I would recommend this to anyone that would love to read it "
"The best one so far, Thankyou for writting such a good story"
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"This book is one of my favs of all your stories. It was so beautiful wow. You are such a great writer. "
"So far great story"
"The book was well written! I loved the ending and felt there should have been a little more on how they got together in the end. It was a very interesting read! "
"That was THE BEST!!!!! Loved everything about it ❤️"
"So intense and suspenseful "
"Good book! Thank you for sharing! 💕💕💕"
"Awesome story !! Keep up the great writing. "
"Wow!! Loved it!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "
"Another good story from you! "