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Devils Daisy

"Amazing.. Great writting"

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"Oh the drama. I have really enjoyed this book "

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HIRE A PROOFREADER

"I very much liked the story, or I wouldn't have trudged through the lack of proper punctuation, misspelled words, and typos to finish it. Please tell me you have fired the proofreader you are currently using. Having said that, I really like your writing style and how you think."

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Great

"The opening line of this story stopped me cold. That kind of first impression is rare and the rest of the story absolutely lives up to it."

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Devils daisy

"Needs a lot of proof reading but the story is good. Has kept me interested"

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Devil's Daisy

"Another amazing story by the author ❤️"

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Daisy's Devils

"OMG... I loved this book. It had everything you would want in a book. Thank you so so much for writing it and sharing it with us. "

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recomded

"love the plot "

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Loved it

"I love your stories this is my second book of yours and the reading is fantastic. The characters are worth it. The women not playing docile weak and standing for themselves and realistic are worth reading. It makes the story compelling and to read in one setting. But one downfall i get so involved in stories and forget to study lol. Though loved your work. "

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sounds so good

"this sounds like it's going to be an amazing story! i cant wait to read more!!"

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Good story but names are muddled

"This book would be a really good read. However, I find that the names of characters keep getting jumbled and changed, meaning you have to reread it over to ensure that you understand whom they are referring to. I feel like A.I was used to help write this and it was not reviewed "

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Illegible

"Unfortunately, it's really hard to read this story. There are constant typos and a lack of punctuation that makes it hard to tell who is speaking, and lots of issues where the author contradicts themselves (ex. she stood but didn't know where to go, so stayed seated). As for the plot, the story is complex and imaginative. However, the erotic parts are veryyyy spaced out and over pretty quickly in a way that isn't gratifying"

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It’s too long started very nice

"Lost plot in the middle "

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