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Heartbreaking and heartwarming

"This was a great story. I'm glad she didn't just accept her family back into her life and developed relationships with the ones that were truly remorseful and were willing to put in work to earn her trust and respect her boundaries. I am sad about Harley but I'm glad she knew her worth and didn't take him back. "

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Lost Innocence

"I loved this book. It held my attention, and I finished it in less than an hour. It grabs your attention, and you have to keep reading 💯 "

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Lost Innocence

"I was hooked from the start on this story. Kyliet, thank you for sharing your story with us. I only saw a few minor errors like a word missing, but nothing to grumble about. Tilly was a strong person, I'm glad she had Jenny and Greg on her side and later Bryson and her other friends. Tilly came out on top and I'm glad she did! This was a very good book, worth the read. You really made me feel like this was a true story about Tilly. I know things like this do happen. You really captured 'her story' in a captivating way. "

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Minor errors

"Minor errors "

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Juvie to a Law Degree

"I'm glad we did the time jump. Too bad about her father and one brother, but what they did was horrible especially since it was on video. Why would you have video and not watch it? Good writing. "

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Lost innocence

"Loved the story.Very life like.Touch your heart and soul."

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Amazing

"I think Ethan and his father should've been made to watch the videos from juvi and see what their reaction was after that. I'm glad Lucas and Joshua accepted her terms and that tilly has non family members to stand up for her. Was said about her and Harley but thrilled with her and Jasper."

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So so good

"This was an amazing story it flowed so well I was gripped from start to finish "

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My thoughts

"The plot is good and believable. The writing is a bit stiff but I think it will smooth out as she writes more. Overall, I’m enjoying the story."

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Lost innocence

"Amazing. I've been crying for this child since I started the second chapter. She is so strong. Beautiful "

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Lost Innocence

"I like how the girl talks about her struggles and how she opens up to the ones that truly matter. Hopefully her family wakes up and sees how wrong they were."

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Lost Innocence

"The story was very well written and heartbreaking. Matilda is a strong person to go through all that she has. It was great to see all the decisions she had to make for her to grow."

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Lost innocence

"It's a very tough book to read. The author makes sure you feel the emotions behind the story. "

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Amazing story

"This was amazing. Truly felt every emotion and had a few tears in my eyes. Appreciated the realistic aspect of forgiveness and thankful there was a happy ending - even if it’s not the one I saw coming ❤️ "

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love it so farr

"it’s a really good story, i’m actually so surprised i’ve enjoyed it because i don’t like that much books but it’s also extremely saddening about what happened to matilda "

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Loved it

"Loved it! I was hooked from the word go. Thank you for a great book. This will make a nice movie."

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Lost Innocence

"This book based on its summary seems like a very emotional story about a girl called Matilda who was mistreated by her family members and who were looking for an opportunity to accuse of something and they did find something. Matilda's supposed father's friend pushed her mothers down the stairs for an unknown reason and then the family took up the case and when her father's friend accused her of being the one who murdered her mother, they believed him in an instant without even checking the security footage and immediately was sent to juvenile. So in essence, what I'm trying to say is that the story was a very interesting one even though I've just read the summary and partially the first chapter. The author really worked hard on this story and deserves a 5 star rating"

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Your writing is brilliant

"Thank you for sharing your beautiful work with us readers. This story had twists and turns all over the place. Loved your characters."

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Great read

"Such a amazing book. I was very shocked about Harley I thought he was good for her and loved her but you never know I am happy Tilly got her happy ending "

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Lost Innocence

"Kyliet, I am so captivated and deeply invested in the stories you write! 'Lost Innocence' was such an emotional, yet empowering, story. The struggles of recovering from the abuse and betrayal Tilly went through - not just from being in juvie, but also from her family - were absolutely heartbreaking. The PTSD and panic attacks were so relatable (been there myself). But Tilly stood up for herself, set boundaries and drew the line in the sand. She stood firm in protecting herself physically and emotionally from those who broke her in the past, and she chose not only her own path in life, but who she would allow to walk that path with her. Well done! "

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