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"I especially loved the character dyamic between the two lovebirds, they were very different people at the start of the story, but as they grew together they seemed to pick up on each others personalities. I also LOVED the storyline, although there was a lot of intense scenes, the dramatic moment when she first gets pregnant had me very shocked. It was random, but it was so needed in a story like this. However, something i would have wanted more is for Ava's best friend diane to have had a bit more involvement in Ava's life. It seems like after the party at the start of the story, Diane just disappeared and spoke in little bits throughout the story but ultimately her character was forgotten. I would have liked to see her reaction to everything happening, and what happended to her after the party. Apart from that, the whole story is increadibly great. "
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