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Slow burn

"In a plot like this one, sometimes the slow burn is good because it lets you get a baseline for the characters and their motivations before the crazy starts. And I can’t wait for it!!"

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Cross my heart

"Great writing. Please continur."

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I'm in love....

"Great story,beautifully written.can't wait.....🫶"

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Cross my heart

"So far it's interesting, can't wait for more chapters "

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A slice of life in a fantasy world

"I'm drawn into the characters and the world, but I'm a little frustrated with Everly and with Bennett too. It's an engaging story, but it ended on more of a 75 minute point than a 90 minute climax. I understand no resolution because leading into book 2, but this didn't feel like the end of the book. I think I need this as the start of something "bad" and then need a big low point/ climax we can get through to end the book (possibly danger or the hint of danger or something involving her secret). But I think it was an enjoyable quick read and I will keep book 2 in mind. I enjoy this author and the way she engages and takes feedback and makes revisions, and would likely recommend her for that alone, but i do think there are plenty of people out there who will enjoy reading this, so take a look. "

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