The Serpent's Heiress

Wendy

24 Kapitel gelesen

Enjoyable Story

"Overall, I really like this story, which is set in a school, but I feel it is more of a romance story with a lot of sexual undertones, which the author told us right at the start. I do appreciate that as well. I really liked the character development and wanted more, wishing it was a bit longer to develop further, but overall it was a good story and I scanned it. The grammar and technical skills were OK; could use another pass, but not terribly distracting from the writing. "

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Faffy

9 Kapitel gelesen

Short and riveting

"Enjoyed build up, and strength of the main character. Story was short, so the plot was quickly rushed where a slow build up would have been nice... but I don’t take anything away from the story, which was good and well written"

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