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Wild

"Well done just wanted more "

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The Alpha Who Refused to Apologize

"I really enjoyed this story! It was not your typical wolf romance, which made it interesting, yet it had the same components, well done. It was a refreshing short story!"

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The Alpha who refused to..

"Yes it was a short story but very very good. I was well written and it kept me interested. It was short but just as good if not better than some of the longer ones I read."

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Great story

"I thoroughly enjoyed this story, I read it in two nights. A refreshing change from the standard stories of this genre. Thank you for writing it."

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Me encanta

"Me encanta el argumento,"

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SORPRENDENTE

"Me ha gustado mucho, me ha mantenido en vilo durante toda la lectura, es una nueva visión de este mundo paranormal de Licántropos, he leído algunos sobre la Luna humana, pero la descripción de esa necesidad adictiva me ha sorprendido y me ha enganchado."

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Schönes Buch

"Hat mir gut gefallen🥰"

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Herrlich interessant

"super gut geschrieben u ziemlich spannend. "

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The Alpha who Refused to Apologize

"Wonderful sweet love story , wishing it was a longer story ❣️"

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Wonderful

"Thoroughly enjoyed the story "

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L'alpha qui refusait de s'excuser

"Bien, une histoire surnaturel qui sort de l'ordinaire. "

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The Alfa who refused to apologise

"Great story would love more please thank you 🙏😀🙏🙏"

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A really novel plot idea with some flaws

"This story has a unique take on the shifter world. It is fairly quick moving and holds your interest but has some pretty glaring continuity issues which are distracting. I also did not care for the male lead’s complete refusal to acknowledge any emotional feelings for his mate. He always referred to her as a clinical necessity. I didn’t enjoy that and thought the female character should have challenged him on it. "

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The Alpha who refused to apologize

"So, this was different in a good way. The male character was cold calculating and one could say even more beast than human in his way of talking/possessing. The female started as a stubborn person but ended up even more stubborn but also a stronger person. The dynamic is interesting and works. Downsides is that there are some hiccups in the story/plot. Some people are introduced as one thing but later on it is changed. Like Rhys, he was introduced as a beta but suddenly he is a rival Alpha. Also there is a lack of explanation for several things, like the term Alpha Heir in this story. I know he is the future Alpha hence heir but his father (who I assume is the current Alpha), never appears or is mentioned and this heir is managing the pack as an alpha would."

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Good

"Readable. Just a bit of confusion towards the end over the names of the rival pack. The Alpha and Beta were both referred to as Rhys. Was also unusual to see the bond written about in a different way and not the all consuming love that usually appears."

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Not a werewolf romance that will leave you feeling loved up

"Eloquently written and great storyline but missing romance/love and emotion. The story is all bond & necessity creating a connection rather than love & tenderness. "

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Review

"This was a really great story! I enjoyed the creative unique storyline of it. It definitely needs some editing as some parts countered others. There were some parts that were confusing too. Some parts were very fast paced and lacking detail, while other parts were heavily detailed. I think it could be fleshed out a lot more and made into a longer piece. Overall I really enjoyed it! 😄"

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