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Loved!!
"Such a good read and flowed beautifully. There were so many side pieces that fit naturally into the story and didnt feel forced. Loved the characters and I never rooted for someone to get murdered as many time as I did while reading this haha! "
Wow
"Dein Buch ist fantastisch. Ich habe es in einem Rutsch gelesen. Es hat alles, was ich mir von einem Buch wünsche. "
Tolles Buch
"Absolut lesenswert, nicht zu kitschig, nicht zu brutal, nicht langweilig und einfach lesenswert. Eine tolle Story ❤️"
His unruly wife
"Great read. It took me 2 days, I think. Coukd do with a little editorial in a few chapters bit really good. "
Quelque chose de nouveau mais tellement merveilleux
"Ce livre m a plu car c est quelque chose de nouveau mais tellement plaisant"
Lovely book
"This was really good. Enjoyed it. Though I didn’t like how there was no misunderstanding between them. It was an arranged marriage. "
Amé
"Me encantó todo, cada escena, cada diálogo, cada personaje. Fue hermoso e increíble leerlo ❤️ "
loved it
"oh I loved it I really want to read another one "
Wundervoll
"Tolles Buch,toller Schreibstil... Love it 🥰"
Amazing story
"I loved how the story flowed, the way it is written is easily understood and clearly pictures. I can actually imagined it in my head all her characters."
Increíble historia
"Desgarradora a veces, sincera sin dulcificar las cosas y una mujer fuerte es lo que más me gusta que aún en sus peores momentos ... Ella marca el ritmo rápida y eficaz a veces demasiado loca pero es una locura que aprendes a querer en esta novela. Mis más sinceras felicitaciones a la escritora ❤️"
Großartig
"Das war eine sehr gelungene Geschichte. Ich habe sie verschlungen. Sie war super spannend geschrieben. Nicht ein Moment wo ich dachte " Bor das wird zu lang gezogen oder langweilig " Nein das war genau richtig. Super spannend und gefühlvoll bis zum Schluss. Und als sie sich verliebten, wo er ihr im Krankenhaus die Lollis 🍭 gab das war so toll 🥰. Ich habe in dieser Geschichte wirklich alle Emotionen mitgemacht und bin super zufrieden. Dankeschön das ich diese Geschichte lesen durfte 🥰 . Mach weiter so 👍🏻🥳"
So Good!
"I was hooked from the beginning. I love/hate a book that makes you cry unexpectedly. You wrote Reina and Alessio's story so well. I hope you continue writing, any story, not just theirs."
Amazing
"I couldn't put it down. Fell in lo e with all of them immediately. I'll be checking into your other work for sure. "
His unruly wife
"Loved it . Couldn't stop reading once started. The author's writing style is amazing. Loved all the characters especially Reina, Alessio and Catalina. Pls keep writing such great stories. "
I liked...
"I loved this book. I liked that it wasn’t like most of the other mafia books. Great book would recommend it to everyone "
There should have been triplets 😂😂 it will have suites alessio and reina
"A beautiful journey of love and friendship.thank you author🫶💐🌹💐🌹"
Histoire
"Merci pour cet histoire j'ai adoré la lire "
Captivating, but in need of thorough editing!
"The plot wasn’t cliché like so many others on this app, it was genuinely captivating. The female lead was strong, determined, goal-oriented, and decisive. She refused to be broken, wasn’t easily scared, and knew how to roll with the punches. She was fair, but unapologetic about her vengeful side. That made her a refreshing and compelling character. Unfortunately, the book was full of inconsistencies and contradictions that gave me whiplash. The timeline was often messed up, and there were so many moments when it felt as if the author had forgotten what she had already written, only to repeat a situation or describe it in a completely different way later. At times, it felt as though the author was writing several stories at once and accidentally mixing the plots. Some scenes were repeated as if they were happening for the first time, even though we had already read them. It made me wonder whether the book had been written in a rush, whether different versions of the story had been mixed together, or whether AI had been involved without proper human editing. At some points, the inconsistencies were so severe that I even wondered if there was an explanation within the story, such as a character struggling with memory loss. Unfortunately, nothing seemed to tie these contradictions together. The final chapters also became a little too mushy and sugary for my taste. There was simply too much fluff and repetition, and I think dialing it back would make the ending stronger. Too much sweetness can take away from the impact of an otherwise beautiful story. Despite all this, I genuinely believe this story is a hidden gem. It has a strong, distinctive plot, a compelling female lead, and a storyline that stands on its own. It has the potential to be one hell of a story with thorough editing, better continuity, and less repetition. The foundation is there, and it is a good one. Ultimately, it is a feel-good story with a happy and satisfying ending, where everyone gets what they deserve, both the good and the bad. With proper editing and a little less fluff, this could be a truly beautiful and memorable read. I just wish the inconsistencies hadn’t taken so much away from a story that had so much potential."
