I'm hooked
"I just finished this and whoa. It's dark, bold, surprising and touches on things people don't talk enough about. There were pleasant surprises, tragedies and a beautiful message. I'm so glad I found this. Id recommend this to anyone I felt could handle the real part of life and the people in it. The characters are beautifully well rounded and developed, be it hero or villain. The love and hurt was felt outside the pages, which doesn't happen often. The connection that develops between each character is deep and meaningful, even if it was disturbing sometimes. The connection the reader feels while reading is unique and special. The timing is excellent and well thought out. The dialogue between characters was smooth, to the point that you're able to put yourself in each scene, almost like you're there, living just outside of the chaos or calm. You've created something here that shouldn't be ignored. Edit this thing, print it (even if it's loose leaf from a printer), and I'll buy a copy. I will be looking for ANYTHING else you write. This is amazing and shouldn't be missed. And although it can end now, you've left it open for an awesome and creepy sequel; I can't help but fangirl all over the idea!"
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