My Fate Series: Book 1

Carolyn

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My fate series 1

"I love your books, the only compliment I have is you don't connect the next book in the series or the next book in line. It's very confusing as to which book is next."

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Elizabeth

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Good

"Good book, great story line"

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Althea Grant

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My fate series: Book 1

"Yes. This book was amazing I love him for Sara why did he had to cheat"

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2jlynn

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Ready For More...

"Sara can't catch a beak... her 3 mates rejected her in the worst way possible. How is she going to recover from this. Is there any hope of her having a 4th mate who will love and cherish her in every way possible?"

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Magdalena

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So sad

"I have enjoyed reading the story and was very sad about what happened in Sara's life but I hope she finds poetic justice and a happy ending."

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Connie White

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Great Read

"😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊❤️❤️😊"

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Great story!

"Loved this, would love to read more on Sara and her baby. I would like to see her find her true mate and finally be happy. I love the way you think and put your stories together. I hope to be reading more from you soon. "

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Alfreda Ghee

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My fate series book#1

"The granger wasn’t too bad just in some places words were confusing. Overall the story and plot was really good. Please write about Sara’s life after this last rejection."

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harper0883

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My Fated Series book 1

"Wow very emotional book felt so sorry for Sarah she just can't catch a break cant wait for book two overall excellent plot strong characters excellent writing skills "

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Amy Thacker

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Love it

"Love it keep going "

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Purplefrog

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My Fate Series Book 1

"I recommend this book to everyone. This book I one of the best books I read. It’s not your regular werewolf story, there’s much more to the book than that!"

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Glenda

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My Mate's Series Book 1

"Please continue with what winds up happening with Sara & her pup"

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My fate series 1

"Really really really good. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and was sad for Sara. Hope she gets a happy ending soon"

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mail4arretta

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Sara

"Very interesting story, glad things are going better for Sara "

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Melinda Chavez

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Review

"Wow alphas and mates everywhere!"

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Enjoyable

"I enjoyed the book immensly but it should be proof read to fix some grammatical errors. I found the book entertaining but can be very sad at times. Somehow I always end up reading sad books, end up crying, and my family always ends up teasing me for it. But other than it being sad I found it quite pleasing. Also if you do get someone to edit it you should get them to help point out the peoples POV that are speaking at the time. (I'm not trying to critique you, I'm just trying to help you make the book more enjoyable and understandable.) Thanks for listening to my comments and keep writing. Bye."

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Angela

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Keep writing

"Yes you should write more. I want to know what happens to sara and her baby"

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My mate doesn't want me but, he won't reject me

"So far good. Book doesn't follow what the discription said but , it's good."

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Heather

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My Fate

"The storyline is good. However, the actual writing leaves a lot to be desired. It is not well written as far as sentence structure, punctuation, etc is concerned."

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giga069

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Poor Grammer and immature

"So much wrong with this book. The Grammer was awful. The POV was all over the place. It is written very immature sounding like a young teen wrote it. Almost like they were trying to sound like an adult using the profanity. It is quite boring actually, and never went anywhere with the story. It's like wash, rinse, repeat. Plot? What plot? Just nothing interesting about it. "

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