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Of magic and men
"Very quick book things moved very fast. Would like to see more in future books "
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Has great potential
"First of all, thank you for sharing this world with us Anka. Now, to my review. The story revolves around a teenage boy so it has clearly been written for teenagers. This is a great teenage hero trope. Regarding Peter and Alaya's relationship, however, it would be nice to have more tender moments between them so the reader knows that they are slowly falling in love with each other. We get certain hints from Peter but not much from Alaya. So. it's kind of jarring even she just ups and confesses her love for him. Apart from that one hug there is no emotional touch that Alaya extends towards Peter. I would have liked if some parts of the story were a bit longer, too. Maybe some scenes on how Silicont found about the Morgan's tower. If there was any kind of recon that was done. It would have been nice if some more people - other than Silicont - were to kind of join Peter and Alaya as they traveled to Elathor's cave and then search for Merlin. But in terms of what I have read, I believe that it is a great concept and story line with the possibility of becoming a series involving Peter and Alaya's children and how they fight the Corruption and Morgan. All in all, I really enjoyed the story and would like to consider it a first draft for Peter's marvelous and fantastic journey."
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