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Is This What They Call "Déjà Vu"?

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Summary

It's about a boy who likes going to different places with his pet lizard. One day they saw a girl and continued their journey with her.

Status
Complete
Chapters
7
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

There was a boy named Atlas, he's parents died when he was young so he only grew up with his pet lizard.

The lizard's names was Legardo. One day they were on an adventure, they went to the Land of Mushrooms, Land of the Soul Fishes, and the Lantern Grounds.

The Lantern Grounds is where people lights up lanterns to remind them of the people who passed and make wishes.

Every time he passes the Lantern Grounds he will always light some to remind him of him parents, and he sometimes go there when it's his birthday.

While he was lighting a lantern he saw a girl that was around his age, she was quite attractive. She caught Atlas staring at her. Atlas didn't quite see her face much because of the distance but she can tell that she was attractive.

"Hello!" she shouted for him to hear. Atlas was quite startled he didn't thought thta she will see him. "Uh..hi?" Atlas waved his hand because his voice was to silent.

The girl ran towards him, he panicked a little because he didn't know what to do. When the girl was close to him she asked "What's your name?", "My name is Atlas.." he said.

The girl smiled and replied "It's nice to meet you Atlas! My name is Amara!" she said. "It's a pleasure to meet you Amara" he said smiling turning red a little.

"The pleasure is mine" she smiled back at him. After they both introduced each other that includes Legardo, they continued their journey with Amara they also made some few new friends but they had to leave so they can't come with them.

One afternoon it started raining, they needed to find shelter

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