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WHITE OUT

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Summary

Reclusive and introverted Wren’s hideaway life is challenged upon the arrival of a classmate whose shimmering eyes give nothing away. Wren will have to overcome more than her own demons this time. Wren possesses the uncanny gift for reading truth in other people's eyes. But when a new classmate challenges that ability and a shocking truth emerges, Wren must fight her own demons to rescue her peer. Book One of Trilogy.

Status
Complete
Chapters
58
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
16+

Introduction: To Be. Or Not. Crazy

Wren AdlerJanuary 26, 2015Mr. TEnglish, Section ATo Be. Or Not. Crazy.Then I’d want to write me all down now, in a Truth Journal,before I no longer knew the truth.I’d want to stack my everythingout in the open,English, Section ATo Be. Or Not. Crazy.Then I’d want to write me all down now,in a Truth Journal,before I no longer knew the truth.I’d want to stack my everythingout in the open,before I eventually separated and scattered.I’d want to swirl up into the sky to your cloud, Daddy,before I blew across oceans to my last White Out,or before any smudged thoughts or ripped feelingsended up on top of a trash heap.To Be. Or Not. Crazy.Then I’d want a powerful back windto plaster my soul against a wall—face up!_________That was the assignment:Write a “To Be” Poemusing the verb <to be> no more than twice.Mr. T circled “White Out” and put a question mark next to it.He underlined the ending and put a check alongside.That wasn’t my real ending, though.To Be. Or Not. Crazy.Then I’d want a powerful back windto plaster my soul against a wall—face up!Why?Because I don’t trust you, Mom.You’re not Anne Frank’s father.You’d totally rewrite my diary.——————Wonder if Mr. T would have underlined those last three linesand put a check alongside them.Doesn’t matter, too personal.And besides, they contained a 3rd <to be>.Truth?After my last White Out,to be or not to be crazy doesn’t matter.To write me all down now,while I’m still here, does.

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