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Summary

Told from two points of view. The killer's and Marisol's, the FBI agent hunting him. Inspired by a saying I found on Facebook: I came by a house last night and told the woman I am staying I said to her, "the moon is bright and my fiddle is tuned for playing"

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Complete
Chapters
40
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n/a
Age Rating
13+

The Idea

While on Facebook, a friend had put this I came by a house last night and told the woman I am staying I said to her, “the moon is bright and my fiddle is tuned for playing” in her status. I told her that it had sounded like the beginning of a short story or a novel. She mentioned that it was a lyric from Celtic Woman.

A friend of hers mentioned that it was creepy.

I said that I wanted to use those lines in a novel or short story and see what happens.

This is what happened.

Marie Garcia

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