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Nina

" حسنا يمكنني وبكل تأكيد ان اقول لكم ان جميع كتب ميليندا جميلة "

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Engaging

"This was a very good story. It keeps your attention the entire time. The plot was very interesting. I really enjoyed it. "

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Collect the pieces

"A beautiful love story with terrible hardships, but a satisfying ending. Complex, challenging with an impressive character development. 👏🏻 The spice and the sexy characters are a huge bonus. 🤩"

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Alki e Academy

"Loved it! ❤️"

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Alkine Academy

"Great series"

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Trauma

"Poor girl she needs to heal and love herself again "

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Amazing story

"I loved the ups and downs to this story and all they went through together they all come out stronger for it. I also loved watching each and every character grow and learn from every situation they were in together as well! Definitely will read again thats for sure and i cant wait to read Starla’s story too! 💗"

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Enjoying

"I'm not good at saying my thoughts but I'll try... I've enjoyed so far the characters make me care about them and the story has brought about my emotions. Some grammatical errors and sometimes a word is missing but all in all easy to read and addictive... keep writing you're good"

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Good read

"I love that her mates are willing to wait for her to get help"

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Love the plot

"Loved the plot. The only issue is several grammar issues. "

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Good read

"I like the story but I don’t like how they keep fucking over their supposed mate. Doesn’t really make sense. But I’m hoping they start to take care of her "

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Necesita un par de arreglos

"Necesita un par de arreglos en la escritura pero en sentido general está bien. "

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That is absolute fantastic✨

"Oh.My.God this story is absolute incredible and lovely at the sametime✨.I am proud of Jaci because she killed Darius and the way she did is total badass the most satisfying killed and perfect revenge.At first and even though her mate like an idiot but still at the end it turn to be happy ending and I love it. I do feel for Cal because of his parent and how cruel the mother was and at last he is happy and satisfied that he ended his nightmare by finished his evil mother that given him absolute zero logic in those excuses she gave him. Well lady I would like to ask a question about the girl that you mention at the end of the story but I know I shouldn't interfere but I found that she is definitely very special to you and I would like to send lots of love to her I'm sure that she is proud of her mummy and love her mummy very much so does her mummy fans well I'm sending my lots of love to you too.The writing style and storyline of this book is absolute fantastic and I loving it. Well you put me in the cloud 9 ☁️ I love it 💖❤️ May God protect you and your Masterpiece 🕊️"

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Couldn’t stop reading!

"This book was so well written and it kept me laughing and crying. I loved this such a good read. "

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Alkine Academy

"I love all your books can't wait for you to write more and finish this one you are a amazing writer "

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Jaci & The Boys

"Good basic story. Like the overall plot line. Like the main characters Jaci and her Mates, but wish that some of the things happening to her didn't feel as though they were just thrown in to the story "just because" it was time for something to happen again. Author needs to work on editing the story for grammatical and spelling errors. "

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Great start!

"Great plot. It is missing chapters. Like what happened between Jaci and Braxton. You should read it out loud to clear up spelling and misused words. "

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Could not finish

"Got about a third or more through and I couldn’t read anymore. There was no character development for the FL at all she just was there mostly in the background. While the story is good and has potential to be great, the writing definitely needed editing, and the author needs to be careful about using the correct words in sentences."

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