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Thirty Shades

"Holy smokes!! I enjoyed this more than I was expecting to. It was entertaining, addicting, and had me blushing. I couldn't stop reading. Thanks to the author for sharing their story! "

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My thirty shades: a kinky autobiography

"The author did a great job in presenting his memories! I enjoyed reading them "

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Part 2 please 🥺

"One of the most erotic collection I have read. "

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Refinement

"Intro ~ Check Smut ~ Check Male Smutty Autobiography ~ Double check Refinement ~ Pending. This story has a lot of potential to do really well since not many eroticas/smuts are told from a male point of view. This is a great way to really show what this particular male lead is thinking as such, I call for refinement in his descriptions, refinement in his point of view. What is he feeling, seeing, hearing? For sure this story can go places, however the flow and punctuation need some work. Hopefully upon editing this story will reach the heights it was meant for. "

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