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Double lines

"Sames changed a couple times and also timelines for child's age. "

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Double Lines

"I loved this story! The characters were relatable and the story line flowed beautifully! What a wonderful love story!"

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Lineas cruzadas

"La historia esta muy bonita"

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Très bien

"Bonne histoire. Je suis contente de lire des histoires sur des femmes fortes avec un happy end, ce qui n'est pas toujours le cas.Je ne suis pas trop fan de la soumission, mais c'est l'histoire d'une autre donc pourquoi pas. Nous sommes tous différents 😉. Merci pour cet agréable moment. "

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Double Lines

"This was such a great book!! I couldn't put it down. I'm so glad Ethan and Mick found eachother again and he was happy with Tyler being his son. Thank you for writing and sharing this book with us. "

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A really good read!

"Love the book. "

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Amazing

"I really enjoyed this story. Great characters and a freat storyline. Only one teeny tiny issue...the author keeps putting the wrong names in the wrong places. "

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I thought I'd already found my favorite 😭

"The plot is beautiful, heart-wrenching, and heartwarming. Such a rollercoaster of emotions. The flash backs and points of view are never confusing. Connections profound and beautiful "

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Amazing

"The story, the plot the writing style Everything is so great, so perfect and this story feels so lovely so homely"

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Locked in

"I love that this book wasn't predictable. Only a forgiving person knows how to make redemption and forgiveness look good in a story. Can't wait to find out what else you have in store."

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Just e this story

"Mack is one resilient woman who goes through a lot of shit from her boyfriend of five years. Though the heartache is a lot she stands up and pulls it all together to move forward for a better future. Great story. "

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Nat

"Great book!"

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My opinion halfway through..

"I’m loving this story so far! I’m so glad E & M are together with their boy! And I absolutely loved seeing Ethan’s point of view from the past and the fact he wanted her before he even knew her. Screw Noah and Andrea or whatever her name is. They deserve each other. They just seem immature. "

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Sweet and Sexy!

"Excellent romance. Strong female lead. Rich family support!"

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Double lines

"Great story. Really enjoyed it. But what happened to Sophia?"

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Double Lines

"The plot of this story is so good! I love how there was a backstory to Ethan meeting Mikaela and most of the povs were from Mikaela. I also loved how The surrounding characters had their own stories and they ended nicely. I would gladly read a story about Declan and adele If there was one. I think their story would be good. "

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Awesome Story of Hurt, Love and Self Worth

"This author does an EXCEPTIONAL job at detailing and expressing the emotions of each character. It feels like I can actually visualize and feel what the characters are experiencing. Like I'm there. Well written author. Bravo!"

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I loooovvveeee this story

"I love the plot and how much Ethan truly cares for, yearn, and loves Makayla when she needed him most. I'm so happy that they found each other again and they have a son together. I hope that they have twins next...lol"

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Double Lines

"This story did not end like I thought it would and I loved that. I thought she may end back up with Noah or a new man and I am so glad it did not end up like that. The writing, grammar and punctuation was good. I recommend this story."

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Love it!

"It was a lovely story to read. Love it!"

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