¿Qué opinas?
Orc
"Luv it so far"
Claimed by an orc
"It has been good so far but I'm only on the first chapter. I wish that we could get more into the story before having to leave a review because it's the first chapter I haven't had much time into reading it yet. "
More Please
"I’m really enjoying this story. It has a lot of potential and I’d love to see where it goes! "
Great story!
"Very nice plot, funny and captivating."
Okay for a short story
"Not bad for a short story. Needs for depth and character development to be more than a quick read."
Claimed by the Orc
"I have completely read your story. It has a good story line. You do have a lot of errors of putting she/her for your heroine, then same paragraph saying "me"."
Orc bride
"Very interesting "
It's ok.
"Hello, this story so far is an ok read. There are plenty of spelling and grammatical errors. I have only read 5 or 6 chapters, so it's hard to properly rate this book at this point in time. I am interested to see what happens next. Keep up the good work. "
