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Awesome read
"Really enjoyed reading this book :)"
Revenge…
"They say revenge is a dish best served cold… however in this case she wanted them to know it was her. Interesting happy ending. There are technical and grammatical errors but the story shines through anyway "
Reborn to revenge
"It so emotional,a wonderful plot ,it's gives hope for a second chance for love, marriage, friendship, relationship and career...it so heartwarming I would recommend it to my friend "
Je pense que je vais le relire
"J'ai aimé et j'ai choisis le livre parce que le titre m'a rappelé une. Histoire que j'avais bien aimé "
Dlmccoy
"This is so good more updates please. ASAP. I do hope this doesn’t end up with hundred + chapters. "
Reborn for revenge
"I dont like the roles of david and nacy !that david can kill his unborn child and take everything from bella!maybe later in the book david and nacy will be remorseful!!!!"
Interesting storyline, needs editing
"For a first book I commend the author. The storyline is interesting, does not drag on, and is easy to follow. I definitely had to drop my sense of realism. How can Bella be a master surgeon,aster hacker, top CEO, and a top fighter all in 5 years? It's a lot, but it worked as long as I kept in mind that this is just a work of fiction. As a native English speaker, I understand that some of the mechanics of the language are confusing. However, I do think this book would benefit from a review by a peer who understands some of the "musts" of writing. It is important to be consistent with the names. Is it Nacy or Nancy? How about Kelvin or Kevin, which is it? There was also some incorrect word choice. I will keep this in my library and will reread it again. Thank you author for sharing your work with us."
Great story
"The plot is great, only complaint from me is it needs fine tuning, editing and maybe English isn't the authors native language would explain the very few phrases that don't really make sense. But overall it's a great storyline and I'm eager to finish reading "
Reborn for Revenge
"Love the story but hate having to share after every chapter it's a pain in the neck"
Plot line is interesting
"I’m going to assume you are a young writer. Your story line idea and characters are good and have a lot of potential. I can see you rewriting and expanding this in a few years and having a good novel. Right now many things are a little disjointed and a little extreme. You’ll need to explain how someone who was basically a standard wife and standard education was able in 5 years time with a weak body to become all the roles you give her, a surgeon alone takes well over a decade of education and experience. Reincarnation doesn’t put you back in your original body, and she wouldn’t be heard under 6 feet of dirt. If you veer into the supernatural like a place in between life and death were she learned and some deity healed her body as the poison would still be present as would blood loss assuming they didn’t embalm her you could easily account for this. This story can definitely be fleshed out to encompass all your ideas but it will take a lot more writing and a much longer book. Personally I can’t story write at all so just the fact you can come up with the characters and plot that I can mostly follow is a big plus if you are in fact still learning. Keep it up. "
