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Will there be a book two

"It was okay but not as good as your other books that you've written this one left us guessing on certain things it went from one player to the next player to another one it didn't quite meet my expectations on certain things like your other books had in chapter 13 needs to be rewritten because it's throws us off and don't leave us hanging on this book like you've done a couple of the other ones that aren't finished yet other than that ain't much that I can say about it it was all right"

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FIRE HAWK MC

"Is there a sequel to this and if so have l just not found it yet...I don't like this "cliff hanger". At least I hope it is a "cliff hanger" because I love the characters so much....."

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The fire hawk mc

"I loved this hope there is a second book would love to hear from you keep up the good work "

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The fire hawk mc

"Great book 📚 please update "

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Great

"As always a great story with so many."

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Endearing HEA... for some.

"Enjoyed the book. The fitst generation characters are by far my favorite... they kids seem to be results of unprotected sex. Yes, the kids were wanted and loved throughout their part of the book; though their part lacks an in depth storyline that gives depth to their personality. Aside from the drastic age gap and passage of time, the storyline was well written and am looking forward to the next book."

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The "fire hawk mc"

"Wow!! Fantastic read!! Love it, EXCEPT for the ending!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "

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The fire hark mc

"Loved it. Definitely need a sequel "

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In Love with all The HEA!!

"I loved how strong the female characters are!! I love all the HEA's as well. There's a few grammatical errors, but it doesn't take away from the flow of the story."

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The Fire Hawk MC

"I've read several of whisper5531's books and really enjoy them."

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The Fire Hawk MC

"I've read several of whisper5531's books and really enjoy them."

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Amazing 🤩

"This novel is so good 👍 I really enjoyed reading your novel ❤️ the storyline was good and beautifully written and I can't wait to read more of your novels 😀"

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The fire hawk mc

"Got a good story but it's choppy. And there are places where names have been messed up with another name. Like Cindy and precious. And there are huge tme gaps. But all in all a good story."

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Good story

"If only it was easier to tell who’s pov it is and who it is taking at all times. It’s confusing at times, but I like the story. "

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The Fire Hawk MC

"Really liking it so far Can’t wait to see what happens next"

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The fire hawk mc

"I love MC books, they are amazing and awesome. The motorcycles, the danger, the love, the rescues, the brotherhood and most of all the bikes."

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The firehawk mcc

"A good story line "

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Firehawk mc

"I love these types of books"

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Yesss

"More please. I love how the story is going "

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Great Read

"😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊"

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