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Denver twins

"Love the story but very repetitive "

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The Denver Twins

"Your story was wonderful! I didn't want to stop reading. I loved it. I'll definitely let people know about it. Thank you for sharing."

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Read in 2 days

"Couldn’t put the story down. Author just as good as many named author.so many interesting characters with many plot twists. Romance, passion and love. Sadness, tragedy, and hopelessness. Yet the story ended on a high note. Love those alpha wolves ❣️"

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The Denver twins

"Really great story "

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Great book

"The book is awesome so far that I read! But in one spot you say alira is pregnant with triplets then you say twins "

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Complex and interesting

"This story is complex and interesting with plenty of action and steam. I liked the characters and how they related to each other. Because there’s so much going on, the author should keep notes of key plot points so they don’t get messed up throughout. For instance, the triplets or twins switching was distracting. I also was initially confused by the multiple names people had based on their wolf or sprite. This could have been explained better. I’d have been interested to learn more about sprites but do enjoy wolf stories. One other note, commas are extremely overused throughout the book making reading sentences a bit challenging. I’m sure the author can fix this easily by reviewing the use of commas and doing grammar checks in future."

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Nothing

"I really like how things turned out for Alia,I hope her triplets has atleast 1 girl."

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Amazing

"Its a wonderful story so far Great work can't wait for more books Great punctuation "

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Finding Truth

"It's a good story "

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Greeting

"Hi Author, I just finished reading your story today, and I really enjoyed it! Please keep creating more—Your work is truly inspiring, and I believe one day you’ll become a very well-known and great writer. "

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