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Sweet karma ….

"Fabulous story, had everything and it was thoroughly enjoyable. Highly recommend "

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Bittersweet A Forbidden Romance

"Beautiful book! Glad Tony got what he deserved!!! Gabe and Jenna were perfect together!!! Loved it❤️❤️❤️"

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Great Story!

"I had accidentally came across this book and I am so glad I did! I spent my whole night reading starting from 8:30pm and it’s currently 3:30am haha. I think that should tell you how good this is! I was gripped by the plot and strapped to the bed for seven hours! Crazy I know but I loved it! Thank you author for giving me a good read 💗 well done! "

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Bittersweet

"Loved this book! She deserves Gabe & I love how Tony got his karma hahah. I wish they had run away together in the first place but then Ava wouldn’t exist. She’s a great child too. This book was full of twists from Al’s story to Marco’s secrets & it was hard to put down. Cute, sweet book!"

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Bittersweet -A forbidden romance

"You did it again! Great story, great characters, great plot. Can't put it down! "

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Amazing

"Love your surprise twist. OMG. Tony got what he deserved. Thank you for sharing the story and your creative imagination with us. I look forward to reading more of your work."

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Great book

"I've loved every bit of it, thanks for this great read. It's one of those books that give hope to people that have been hurt by those they really loved, it gives you this feeling that maybe there's someone in the universe just made for me and it also helps one not to blame themselves for something their beloved did to them. For instance you can do 💯 for someone and it's still not appreciated and it ain't your fault. Thanks for preaching hope to broken souls I hope you write a sequel to fill in some missing bits about some characters. "

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Another great story recommend

"I don’t know why you won’t publish. Your stories are as good if not better than many novels I’ve read. Again I would love a sequel. More on what happened in those missing sixteen years. On to my next Chrissy Vellis story. "

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Loved it

"So many emotions reading this loved every chapter ending is GOLD well done author."

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Bittersweet - 🥰

"Another amazingly written book girlie! You know I am hooked on all things @ChrissyVEllis 🥰😍 I loved the relationships in the book from all the different friends to the ones with the kids. The sexiness of Gabe and Jenna was 🥵🥵🥵 Can’t wait to read many more of your creations babe!!! 😍😍 As always thank you for sharing!! Xoxo"

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Bittersweet

"Good job! Love that you always have curve balls in your storyline! Keep writing! Thank you for sharing! 💕💕💕"

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Bitter sweet Forbidden love

"Thank you for an awesome story. This book is for keeps, I will not mind reading it again and again. Your writing style is captivating and easy to follow and understand. You keep the reader on their toes one chapter after the other. Your story keeps one on a high (suspended) from beginning to the end. Your characters come alive in every chapter, making this book a reverting read. Thank you talented author. 💐😍🥳👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽"

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Love this!

"Plenty of romance, family drama, some heartwrenching issues, and just a bit of smut. I laughed and cried and fumed and cheered. This book was entertaining and kept my attention to the very end. The plot wrapped up well, no loose ends for the main characters. For a story that hasnt been through professional/paid editing, the grammar is fantastic! A handful of tiny grammatical errors but nothing that created a hiccup in reading or made you have to reread to figure out what was meant. There were no accidental name changes or POV issues, no inconsistencies in the verb tense. I know things like that don't make a good story bad, but having them correct can make a good story great. And this is one great story. I can't wait to see what else this author has in store for us! **SPOILER WARNING, not regarding the main characters, but skip if you're cautious** There are 3 untold bits to this story. None if these affect the main plot, but I'm awfully curious! 1. We never find out what happened with Lucas! Where is the baby brother? Did he reconcile with his Ma? Does he know his neice and nephews? Did he stay with the guy in Canada? 2. Whatever happened with Al? We heard there's someone on the hook, but never find out, or even hear that it was unsolved. I want to know for Eli's sake. 3. So Tony gets his comeuppance, but what about Marco? Does he ever get in trouble? Does he come to terms with Lucas or remain a prick? How does Vivi feel about the kids and Ellie? What happens with her and Marco's relationship?"

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Diamond in the rough!!

"This book was everything I didn’t know I needed! What a wonderful story! One of the best I’v read in a long time! Well done! Thank you for sharing you talent! ❤️❤️😊"

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Happily ever after

"Could you make the same mistake twice? Jenna thought she was happy, married to Tony Valentino only to find out that he was not all that she thought. Heartbroken, single mother....would she get a second chance at "forever happy" that asked, with Tony's twin brother?"

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💜💜

"Enjoyed reading 💜 loved the ending 💜😁💜"

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Bittersweet - a forbidden romance

"Thoroughly enjoyed it. I was hooked from the start. The only thing I will say,, is the grammar was a bit shaky at times. It wasn't anything major and didn't alter my reading experience "

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A Different Plot

"It's refreshing to find a different plot, but it's slowed down a bit. With not long left in the story maybe it'll pick up. "

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