Inkitt
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¿Qué opinas?

Please please me

"So far so good."

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Good

"Nice character set up"

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I'm hooked

"Oh my goodness, I'm hurt. I'm really enjoying this novel so far. I love the characters. I loved the sthor line. Everything about it's really interesting. I would recommend everyone to read this."

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A lot of potential

"Since this novel is only 5 chapters long I can’t really find anything to critique or offer any criticism towards since the plot, characters and direction is being honed in and expanded. For now, I really like the direction this novel is going. I enjoy the multiple perspectives, thorough descriptions of characters and the emotional depth of them. The writing style of the author is fluid and well crafted. I’d like to continue reading this tale to get to some extra spicy parts and see where the plot goes. Nice work!"

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