El desafío del Dom

Wanda49

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Dom’s Challenge

"An Erotic/ Romance novel written by the author NaughtySub. Is a very 🔥 erotic story of a woman named Opal and a man she finds on internet called Daddy. He is a Dom in the BDSM world and he teach women more about his world. ❤️‍🔥 This novel is very interesting and learned a lot, but romance curled my toes and melted my heart 🫠 want find out why come join me NaughtySub’s world. I’m hoping we meet in the continuing story DOM’s Challenge💕💕💕"

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Wanda49

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Dom’s Challenge

"An Erotic/ Romance novel written by the author NaughtySub. Is a very 🔥 erotic story of a woman named Opal and a man she finds on internet called Daddy. He is a Dom in the BDSM world and he teach women more about his world. ❤️‍🔥 This novel is very interesting and learned a lot, but romance curled my toes and melted my heart 🫠 want find out why come join me NaughtySub’s world. I’m hoping we meet in the continuing story DOM’s Challenge💕💕💕"

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Taz854234

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Pulls me in...

"Amazing attention to detail. I could feel the intense sexual attraction of the characters. I recommend reading if you need a "spark"."

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Bronwyn Jaco

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Dom

"Oh my gosh , took me a while to find a good book again , and what have I found a diamond being shaped. Gosh keeping me on edge kind of like the character . Just abit of typing errors , good read to keep me distracted . keep it coming "

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Velma

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Notin

"I choice my rating because I enjoy the book "

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theinvisible

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Has potential

"I do think this book could have been better. There were quite a few spelling and grammer mistakes throughout. It was not bad but it could have been better. I do think the development of how she got on the apps and why could have been better, and hoe the characters developed aswell."

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