Volver a la historia

Valoraciones promedio

  • Valoración general
  • Trama
  • Estilo de escritura
  • Gramática y puntuación

¿Qué opinas?

My review

"Its good that anika and shivaay are exploring their life and they don't have any trust issues with each other "

  • Valoración general
  • Trama
  • Estilo de escritura
  • Gramática y puntuación
I like the story no love it. Some parts are so sweet like when shivay was trying his best and forget his cold aura and ayaan and shivay jealousy moment everything is so lovable in this story

"I like the story no love it. Some parts are so sweet like when shivay was trying his best and forget his cold aura and ayaan and shivay jealousy moment everything is so lovable in this story i will definitely told my bestie about this story "

  • Valoración general
  • Trama
  • Estilo de escritura
  • Gramática y puntuación
Awwsome book

"Must read, very romantic"

  • Valoración general
  • Trama
  • Estilo de escritura
  • Gramática y puntuación
Love it!!

"Please update more!!!"

  • Valoración general
  • Trama
  • Estilo de escritura
  • Gramática y puntuación
Love it

"Love how you writes the details "

  • Valoración general
  • Trama
  • Estilo de escritura
  • Gramática y puntuación
His second wife 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

"Perhaps what I am seeing as style is due to lack of experience. But if that is so then the author is very talented. I find it engaging, I care about all the characters and I hope to learn more about them. By a few chapters in I got used to the writing style realizing that it was very expressive and seemed to be culturally appropriate. Yes there are words that need to be corrected but it is easy enough to discern the intent. I recommend this story highly. "

  • Valoración general
  • Trama
  • Estilo de escritura
  • Gramática y puntuación
Hard to read

"I really like the plot, but it is just so hard to read. There are no commas to break up a long sentence. There are no quotations to indicate when a character is speaking. And a bunch of words are mashed up in a way that doesn't go together. It's all just a jumble of run-on sentences, which is a shame because the plot is SO good. This could be a really great book. It just needs some serious editing. No hate or anything.🙂 "

  • Valoración general
  • Trama
  • Estilo de escritura
  • Gramática y puntuación
Anika sorrow

"Plot and title of the story "

  • Valoración general
  • Trama
  • Estilo de escritura
  • Gramática y puntuación