¿Qué opinas?
A Canvas Called Violet
"Beautiful ❣️ Written with warmth, love and kindness ❣️"
Unlike anything I've read...
"It would be very easy for someone to get bored with this story because it does not follow what really is a standard boy meets girl story. Violet drew me in with the way she had to "see" the world around her. I found myself stopping to close my eyes to "feel" the world around me. That is what kept me engaged. I am very excited to read about Alice and Nico for a whole different perspective (I also just enjoyed Alice - and very much appreciated that she wasn't a primary character where she easily could have been). "
A CANVAS NAMED VIOLET
"This is an AWESOME story!! I felt that I was able to get into Violet's mindset. I was rooting for her throughout the story. Worth reading again. 💚💚💚👽"
Excellent
"I ❤️ this story! The unique twist of hockey and art! Perfect! I gave less stars for writing simply because the last chapter has some repeated paragraphs! "
I wanted to love it!
"This is a good story and definitely worth reading, but there could have been so much more. Violet and Leo are amazing, but I felt like the opportunity for an epic love story was missed. The story of two broken people finding each other and overcoming obstacles is there, but it lacked fire and passion. There were so many missing details for me. I did enjoy it and would love to read Alice's story. 🩶❤️"
Story needs editing...
"Alot, the story line is good but it has some holes and some of the lines are repetitive. Keep writing though, but it seems you write better from POVs, nothing is wrong with writing in third person, just get some guidance on how to do it better. Jacob was an ass and he deserved his end but I don't think he went away so quietly, so I'm sensing a major re-write. Not a bad read though."
