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Tierna historia 😚

"Me ha gustado y conmovido mucho. Buena trama y muy bien escrita, felicidades y gracias por compartir ☺️"

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Tessa und Zane

"Eine wunderschöne Romance, mit Höhen und Tiefen, wie aus dem realen Leben heraus geschrieben. "

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Belle romance 💞

"Romance très bien écrite ✍🏽, où les personnages sont attachants 😍. Merci !!! Au plaisir de vous lire 😉"

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Great Book

"Great Book! Good story line, well written. "

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More than a game

"Love this story so much!!!❤️ I was so absorbed in the story that I forgot I was just reading. "

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More than a game

"What attracted me to this book was the title and I decided to check it out and I wasn't disappointed to be honest. The writing style is unique but amazing and I would recommend it to those who enjoy young adult novel "

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Predictable but still good!

"I love the story and the writing style. It has just enough laughs and makes me want to keep reading."

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Hiii

"I liked the story\ book so much I thought I would be boring but when I started reading it it turned out it was the best thing I ever read. I really hope the make a part 2 about it I really want to see how it turns out with them.. I will say I rate the 100,00000/10 SO PLEASE MAKE A PART 2 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏"

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how good it was

"loved the book"

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Great story

"I really enjoyed the playfulness and sweetness in this story"

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🫶🏽

"U are an amazing writer! Keep going! 🥹🫶🏽✨"

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More Than A Game

"Young Tessa Hartwell’s initial relationships with love interest rivals Zane and Logan hit the reader as a delicious series of playful YA tropes. The story is full of punchy, sassy, easy-flowing dialogue and effective chapter cliffhangers to keep the reader engaged. The author's use of short, high-engagement segments and spirited teen dialogue suits the rapid, free-flow action and emotional rollercoaster of high school relationships as Tessa navigates to her true heart. A reading highlight is Tessa’s bestie Maddie and her razor-sharp wit. Maddie has regular scene-stealing lines. Overall, the text requires patches of editorial polish, but this never distracts from a winsome and zesty YA read. "

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More than a game

"I was hooked! I read the book in one sitting. Absolutely loved it. A few typos but nothing major."

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My Crazy High School Life

"I love the drama "

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Loved More than a game

"I loved the story! The characters are well-defined, and touching. We are in the head of the main character, feeling what she is feeling and knowing what she is thinking, it really takes us with her throughout the story. The story is cute (and not as long as it seems when you see 60+ chapters haha). Some parts are a bit long or repetitive, but it is catchy enough to overlook it. Nice to read!"

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More than a game

"I haven’t finished it yet just the first chapter but I really like the start, great build up and lays a strong foundation for the story. "

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Good story

"The story was good. I personally think the first half of the story needs more depth. It was a lot of jump from one conversation to another with no time line, no home/personal life, no deep conversations with each character to learn more personal thing, and no over whelming descriptions. Once Maddie finally decided on Zane the story started to get a little more detail. Maybe tell the story again but from Zanes and Logans perspective. "

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Comic Commission

"Hello! The world and characters you created in "More Than a Game" truly inspired me when I recently read it. As a comic book artist who enjoys turning narratives into images, I would be thrilled to discuss the possibility of working with you Feel free to reach out at! Discord: wiewior114 if you're interested. I'm eager to hear from you!"

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Yay so intrigued

" The part of where she doesn't know what to expect or choose btw them I'd recommend it to my crush Well rated it cause I'm also a writer and well it just increases my writing life "

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Potential

"I felt like this story had a lot of potential and I wanted to love it, but it felt repetitive. Love the idea, just needs more depth and personality. "

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